Reviews for Did She Ever Care?
Dena Gray chapter 4 . 2/14/2012
well done! sad and lovely
Dena Gray chapter 3 . 2/14/2012
Good determination and I can see Alice sitting there, crying, holding Jasper's hand.
Dena Gray chapter 2 . 2/14/2012
Ah, how sad! Heartbreaking! Well captured.
Dena Gray chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Except for the mentioning of names, I would say this could be a standalone piece of rather moving poetry. Lovely done.
Blood of Your Lips chapter 4 . 1/17/2011
This is the first poetry fic I've ever read and I must say that I'm impressed.
kimmie1995 chapter 4 . 8/25/2010
Dang.. itss so sad.

update soon ?
soul surfing chapter 2 . 3/21/2010
Awh, I love it so far. It's good that someone finally brached out and decided to write some poetry. I'm enjoying it, in a sad way. Please continue.
xXxZellyxXx chapter 3 . 3/21/2010
this was good, love that in Alice's POV they took the coward's way out. They wanted to end all ties with Bella so everything would hurt less.

Also how it shows that Edward is never right

great job 3

~Zelly
xXxZellyxXx chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
even tho i hate eddie-boy, it was good to see how he felt, maybe you should do alice's

~Zelly
xXxZellyxXx chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
love it, love how bella felt when they were gone, ciao
Stand Through The Pain chapter 2 . 8/4/2009
that was really really sad i almost cried but then again im a huge baby
swwblackhawk chapter 2 . 8/2/2009
Not bad I would like to see what Alice's take on it was though