Reviews for Artist Heartbeats
Andy is quite dandy chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
So. Many. Mistakes. All sorts of grammar and spelling mistakes. Yet despite all that, this story pulled at my heartstrings throughout the entire thing. Deidara's misery and worry and Sasori's guilt and sacrifice. It was all so depressing in the beginning and it was perfect in the end! But I think the length could go a bit more. The impact of the proposal and Sasori's apology would have been much greater if we had seen more of Deidara's state before this or maybe even the argument. I know if it did show that, I would be tearing up. Though I will say you're really good at tugging heartstrings. Anyways I really loved this story, a cute heartwrenching oneshot! Good job ㅅ.ㅅ
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
That was friggin CUTE D:

It also set a really good atmosphere. Very calm and warm really good writing!
kariuchiha19 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
how cute!i really enjoyed this.
XcoffeexisxmyxonlyxdrugX chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
I loved it.
AKATSKI GIRL chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
LOVED IT
AKATSKI GIRL chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
WOW I READ THE WHOLE STORY IT'S WONDERFUL!
Effsnares chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
I was really depressed. Then I read this. And poof, the depression was all gone! It was so sweet and well written! Thank you!
AKATSKI GIRL chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
OK WELL YA I ONLY READ THE END YOU SAID IT WOULD BE SAD THAT Y I ONLY READ THE END OF IT BUT WOW THAT WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD!
Magnum Opis chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Absolutley wonderful, as allways Lo.