Reviews for August
NotTophMelonLord chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
aww! this is soo cute! I love it :) 3
xxLosAngelesAngelxx chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
Ek, this is so cuute(:
chocolatebearturk chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Cute! The arguing made it WAY more realistic than some of these crazy fanfictions...

:D Good job, and keep up the good work!

POTR
xxx0 chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Aw, Jonnah-kins x]

This is absolutely adorable. I love how whenever you write these you start them out fighting instead of having them already be a couple like a lot of fics I've seen -_-

Now for the things I really liked:

[1] The way you put 'despised' in quotation marks. I love how that hints that she doesn't really despise him, she's just supposed to, and because of that she can't ever admit that she really does like him.

[2] The famous "Really, Sonny? Really?" You used that in your other oneshot too and it makes me laugh because I love that line, and when you incorporate it into the fic in the serious moments, it adds humor without getting rid of the drama. Which I am envious of, by the way. You've seen my dramatic chapters. They don't turn out too well D; Then when I try to put humor in, things pretty much die.

[3] Just your wording. I love it. It's so...highschool-girl, but not, y'know? Like, it's exactly what runs through a teenage girl's mind but it also gets the story across.

I'll shut up now. Hopefully FF allows brackets...if not, this review is going to look really stupid.

...I want to write SWAC now. Ahahahha. Feel good about yourself.
Harryfan94 chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
i luv this story
secretlover101 chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
i realli like this one shot it was nice and sweet ]
gAnGsTa GaBbY lOvEs JoKeR chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Love it!
BeckyRocks chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
cute
Always Juliet chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
That was a beautiful story. Lovely job.
sonnycentral chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Aw, that was really sweet :)
TrinityFlower of Memories chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
How adorably sweet! love it all!
tjtay chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
I LOVED it! Love channy!

-tj-tay
WordOverdose chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
LOVED IT!
Cat1030 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Good story, I really like it!
cocosunshine23 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
i like it:D you should continue
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