Reviews for Mindfuck
animechick57 chapter 1 . 4/11
I know Im super late to review this, but your omeshot was super hot
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3
Jaii chapter 1 . 3/9
Oh man
I love this
Sooooooooo much
Sequel please?
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2016
how I imagined it:
"AHGHES- *gargle* EHHY!"
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2015
So hot... Now I'm going to try find Jimmy x Gary. dx

With mention to "a gift" so often that would probs be a better title.
MPoutine chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
So immediately after finally banging, they have a couple's quarrel? AND OH MAH MONKEY BALLZ PRAIS THE LAWD IVE FOUND THE BEST YAOI LEMON IN THE ENTIRE !
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
Haha. Yay! I love this so much dude! :D thanks for sharing your awesome yaoi skills with the world dear :)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
I love it
Demon Vampire180 chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
This was absolutely amazing. And I don't say that jokingly. You captured their personalities to a T. You have a fantastic, flowing writing style that kept me wanting to finish the entire way through. I honestly cannot say the last time I've read a fanfiction as well written as this was. Bravo!
GamerMouth chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Fuck! you have to make more gary and petey! O.O please for the love of god make more of this! oh my god it was amazing! PLEEEAASEEE!
AsianIdiot16 chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
btw they was sooooo hot! i lost it as soon as gary started stripping.
AsianIdiot16 chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
OMG YESSSSSSS! This was exactly what i was looking for! i saw that scene (when pete is watching swimming) and after gary kept bothering pete, all i thought was "petey totally ha a thing for gary and gary has some in-the-closet feelings about him too." though its not true in the actual plot of the game, all i could think about was if they had a thing for each other. and i am looking for good stories with them in school. cause a lot of the stories i've seen so far are about petey visiting gary in the mental hospital or wherever they sent him.
Totallynotmoca chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
kammess chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Plotless sex is the best sex xD
3.1415927 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
This was so awesome! I loved it. In the middle though, I thought of Jimmy just chillin' in the trash can outside of the commons area and just staring at them, like "So that's how they are." I couldn't stop laughing, lol. But it was an amazing oneshot.
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