Reviews for Rewriting
Guest chapter 11 . 7/22/2013
Hey! I know you've left the fandom, so there's probably no chance that this will be completed, but...

I want to say that this is one of the best AU fics I've read in ever, and there's not a lot of those that are on this site that are worth reading. I hope you do get inspired somehow to post the last chapter ( if that ever happens I will love you forever ).

Thanks for an interesting and worthwile read!

-Just a fan
another.creative.lover chapter 11 . 7/26/2012
Okay, so the night you sent me off to read the only ten chapters of this story, I ended up researching each of these characters.

And I have to say: shivers down my spine.
I looked at each of them backwards and forwards and wow...

If the rituals didn't happen, this is probably what would have. x_x

Now I just have to look up Seijiro. (insert Jaws music here)
Mocca-Marocchi chapter 11 . 7/26/2012
Sae's ending is good too! She didn't realize her crime she committed after it had been too late... Poor girl! . She must be really mentally ill because of Yae's and Itsuki's absence. I also like the scene when Sae encountered Chitose. It was somehow touching... I don't know why.
I'm glad that you resume this story! Please update!
Mocca-Marocchi chapter 10 . 7/26/2012
It's been a long time! Sorry, I don't know the tenth chapter has been published until I got your story alert
What a tragic end of Kirie... She wasn't only dead, but also holding grudge against every living being... So sad! As usual, I like your style of writing this chapter. Good job!
another.creative.lover chapter 10 . 7/24/2012
O_O
OMIGOD THAT'S SUPER FREAKY.

Totally understand the beginning of this chapter now. x_x Jeez, too malicious.
But I'm sure that she has right for it.
It's like the grudge all over again. (sigh). Probably.

And yea. The dad's insane.
Falling in love isn't a sin.
Killing someone is.
Just saying. x_x
another.creative.lover chapter 9 . 7/24/2012
Q_Q

Everyone's dying.
WHY IS EVERYONE DYING AND SUICIDING AND STUFF?

(throws brush to a mirror) I CAN'T TAKE IT. j 3 j

WHY DID KANAME DIE, HE JUST GAVE HER THAT LOVER'S STONE THING WAHHHHHHHHH

(dies)
another.creative.lover chapter 8 . 7/24/2012
Guilt, pain, sorrow, cynicism-it's all here in all of these stories. :o
Wow... Itsuki killed himself. Q_Q
OMIGOD HE MURDERED HIS BROTHER AFDSGHJKL;

OMIGOD NOOO CHITOSE
...
I'm just going to go hide my face somewhere. Q_Q

The depression.
another.creative.lover chapter 7 . 7/24/2012
o_o
Yeah. The dad's insane. He's a psychopath.
Only psychopaths enjoy killing people. I'm pretty sure he wouldn't hesitate in killing his daughter.

BUT OMIGOD HUYU! DDDD: I'M DYING RIGHT NOW WHY WOULD ANYONE KILL A BOY WHO OFFERS PEACHES AS A SIGN OF LOVE THEY WERE SO BEAUTIFUL

["Huyu, have you ever seen a woman in this house?"

"Uh…I haven't sir."

"Alright…but if you have, it could've been the spirit of my late wife."

"Spirit? Are you saying this house is haunted?"

"Maybe, maybe not. All I'm saying is that if you see a woman anywhere in the house; do not speak to her. Ever. Do you understand?"

"Yes sir…"]
WHUT. WHUT IS THIS.
another.creative.lover chapter 6 . 7/24/2012
x_x

... CAN YOU FEEL THE LOVE TONIGHT
CAN YOU FEEEEEL IT TOOOOOOOOO?

XD Just thought you might appreciate that.

I'm sorry I'm not being serious about this fic. j 3 j But I am. I seriously am.
D: God, that old hag. WHY U SUCH A BISCH?

... yeah, she likes a younger man. SHE'S A COUGAR.
another.creative.lover chapter 5 . 7/24/2012
...

Mutsuki: suicide or homicide?
Wow...

There's this obsession with twins in here, huh? x_x And then one twin commits suicide/runs away/leaves/dies/gets killed by the other...
and the other one lives to regret it?

I like this story the most.

But I really hope Itsuki doesn't commit suicide. ; ;
another.creative.lover chapter 4 . 7/24/2012
"Sometimes nothing will happen...but at times, you will find a very special someone waiting for you at the top."

"...are you waiting for me at the top, Huyu?"

I saw this last part, and I totally died like ASDFGHJKL;AKJDFLKASFA;FKSF OMIGOD SHE WANTS HUYU TO WAIT FOR HER.

When I first read Huyu, I immediately shipped them. XD
Pretty bad of me, huh?

But seriously: dark eyes, slightly spiked hair in the wind, peach-cutter, bloody hand, AND gentlemanly? Who WOULDN'T be attracted to this man? XD
another.creative.lover chapter 3 . 7/24/2012
Wow... ):
Poor Reika.
Poor everyone.

Actually you know what, screw everyone; NO ONE KNOWS HOW REIKA FEELS.
It's hard enough that you couldn't help your parents, but it's also hard to know that you gave up on them for your own life. Anyone would do that. We're all cowards, so we should never judge.

:D Another storyline, yay!
another.creative.lover chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
I really love this style. D:
I'm not sure if they're separate oneshots though. x-x
(fails at this fandom) x_x

But I love it. D:
The insanity, the love for a sibling...
... and the loss of a loved one. x_x

And I love the description of the red rain, and the thoughts in parentheses.

gorgeous.
another.creative.lover chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
:D

"Father, why is mother still sleeping?"

"She's very tired, Kirie."

"Why are people crying? She'll wake up soon, right?"

nice way to open up.

I've always like this style. The opening's very concise, but it hits you! I'm not sure what to expect, seeing as I'm not from this fandom, but I'm liking it. ;)

D: What happened to mommy? (dead)
Daddy? (insane)
Kirie? (still inside of the house after so many years)

Aw hell. x_x
Ruvi Chan97 chapter 9 . 12/8/2011
I can't wait Reika in next chapter!
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