|Reviews for The Deluded|
| Lillywhite1 chapter 24 . 6/7
Thanks for writing this amazing story!
| Pscullen chapter 5 . 10/14/2016
| Kopec82 chapter 24 . 11/26/2015
Very refreshed story, really like it. Well done
| Kopec82 chapter 7 . 11/25/2015
Hahaha Edward Is the chulacabras! Hahaha
| 116jeff chapter 6 . 10/17/2015
Intriguing and novel story. A bit hard to follow the time jumps in places but well-written. Reading on...
| kadronya chapter 24 . 5/27/2015
I love your story!
| Emmanuelle Nathan chapter 3 . 4/12/2015
The Lauren incident was priceless. And what a way for Edward to break his news... is he insane or really a vampire? He doesn't seem to have all of the Twi vamp qualities - cold hands, no heartbeat etc...
Mmm. Curiouser and curiouser.
| Emmanuelle Nathan chapter 2 . 4/12/2015
Just stumbled on this story and an very curious to see where is heading. What is lurking in the woods?
| Guest chapter 24 . 2/28/2015
Thank you.. loved it :-)
| Knit Bug chapter 24 . 2/26/2015
I loved this story. So unique. Thank you so much for sharing it- for sharing your words. A really, really good read. So many twists and turns I didn't see coming, so thank you for keeping me on my toes.
| shehazi chapter 22 . 2/26/2015
An epic tale! Thank you.
| shehazi chapter 15 . 2/24/2015
Oh Eli...so much love and growth. I sincerely hope h e gets a mate too. 3
| shehazi chapter 14 . 2/24/2015
This is one helk of a ride! Thank you..I can barelypause from reading each chapter to review..
| shehazi chapter 13 . 2/24/2015
probably the best depiction of James and Victoria, that I've read... including the original...and we can't even 'see' them!. Thanks for sharing
| shehazi chapter 12 . 2/24/2015
30 lashes with a flogger for that cliffie! But then we'll kiss it better :-)