Reviews for Appetite
JULERZZ chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
This is awesome. Short, sweet, heated. I don't like Ino, but I like the pairing, and you make her more likable how you wrote this.
iiquickivy0u chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I love this! You should totally continue the story XD
Troublesome Shikamaru Fan chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
OMG, I totally LOVED this! You did such a fantastic job at capturing the characters and their moods...making them feel full and real. I totally love you for this. :) (And Shikamaru's reaction? Pretty much perfect!)
w0ven chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
I enjoyed it! Very cute.
LaGraciela chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
I just read the first 15 chapters of Scar tissue, the other story in which you incorporate ChoIno and i really do like it. In a way I find it funny how the style of writing is so much more detailed at the beggning of this one but not so much at the end. It would help other readers who have not read your other tory to write more about what happened to Choji and his arm (ad which arm to be exact). You could even elongate it into a multiple chapter story if you want. It was nice.
overlordofnobodies chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Man I have to go and read that other story. I like this none of the lest. I just did not get it.