|Reviews for Unadulterated Leap|
| andysanime chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Really good job on this story! 3
| Okay I was intending to have chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
Okay, I was intending to have Raven and chocolatebunnies go over this first but after typing it I decided I would simply upload it and see how it's received. Any future chapters (if I decide to continue this) will only be posted once I've discussed it with the two aforementioned authors, if they are willing to accept the task. I was aiming for a bit of crack with this one but it seemed to have fallen short and the ending strikes me as well, kinda lame.
| RainingArrows chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
I am a hard core Mello/Near fan myself and I think that this was really good.
The characters were pretty much in order and it seemed kinda fluffy.
Good job, I would love to see it continued. :)
| The Wammy Girl chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
i liked it very much. but that may have been partially because the ad on the page was for socks...
i would recommend writing a few more chapters, keeping it short(ish) and sweet.
| Seiren Sekito chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
My old computer (I use a laptop most of the time now) constantly gives me the blue screen of death, too.
I like this story, and I can't wait to see where it'll go, if you decide to update. I hope you do.