|Reviews for The Dog, The Girl and The Walk in Closet|
| Valkarious chapter 38 . 3/4
Just read this from the start to the current chapter, and i've been hooked. Very much looking forward to reading more, so keep the good work coming! :)
| Dragongirl180 chapter 38 . 1/4
I have quite enjoyed the story so far. I can't wait for more. Especially the first kiss with basch. :3
| White Ivy chapter 38 . 8/31/2013
Great fic! i hope Edi figures out what's going on - whether she was really ever in this realm (which is a possibility if witches can travel between realms) or if it's all a curse that's messing up her head.
| Guest chapter 38 . 7/7/2013
I hope you get a chance to update this soon! I'm hooked!
| maggiexxmoment chapter 38 . 5/8/2013
Wow first I just wanna say sorry for not reviewing in such a long time! I missed a few chapters and then just didn't have the time to catch myself up until now. I think the last spot I left off was around the Ozmone Plain?
Okay, so once again I'd like to express how much I love your descriptiveness. Even though I already know what these places look like, you put such a unique spin on them and all of the places not visited in-game are very vivid.
I've loved all of the Basch and Edie moments! And I love your use of dreams with them as well. You finally had them acknowledge it too which was interesting. Though possibly even more than the Basch and Edie moments are the moments Balthier teases her about them and they get into arguments, I loved the part when they got drunk together, it was pretty funny!
I could go on and on but what I mostly want to get to is the reveal of Edie's "past". I think it's such an interesting storyline and I really love the way you managed to sneak all of the details into the story beforehand. I expected her to have something to do with Rozarria, but her connection with Al-Cid was totally unexpected and I totally loved it!
Anyway, that basically sums up everything I wanted to say. I'm really excited for the next chapter!
| Dreams-of-Archades chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
I don't know how 1. I have missed this story on my years looking through this fandom and 2. I have never reviewed before.
I took the liberty of looking at your bio before reading this and as soon as I saw you not only saying that you were influenced by Phillip Pullman, C.S Lewis AND the Kaiser Chiefs, but you then said that one of your favourite characters is Iorek Byrnison and I was dying from feels.
This first chapter (I know is over three years old now - damn) is amazing. I have read (and written) some bloody terrible OC fanfictions before but this is not one of them. I love Edie already, I love Kaiser and I adore the way you write.
| Guest chapter 38 . 4/13/2013
how is the group going to take to her dog?
| MidsummerMoonlight99 chapter 38 . 4/12/2013
I love how you combined cetain elements of FF 10 and 12, would love to see some more connections. The fight with Bergan was really well written. Some great world building here, I can't wait to see how the journey to Archadia will go. I always felt like that part of the game was a bit of a slog. Good luck on the next chapter!
| SomeoneThatExists chapter 38 . 4/12/2013
Ah, the song was the Hymn of the Fayth right? It fits with the story. Anyway, you certainly left us all hanging long enough! But the wait was worth it. Keep updating!
| Raging Berseker chapter 38 . 4/12/2013
hopefully we see more of this wonderful story. It hs its shoujo moments, but I more intrigued in the coexstience of mariska and edie. I wonder if they pulled off some type of soul magic or time space hence the gravity spell is a unique spell not home to ff12. The next thing I truly wonder is that she and the group might take on farnir which is one tough SOB
| Skyfireflight16 chapter 38 . 4/12/2013
YAY! Kaiser's back! YAY! :D
| ZodiarkSavior chapter 38 . 4/12/2013
I have to say, you're doing an excellent job at writing this story. The descriptions are beautiful, as is the scenery along with the exploration of character depth. You have to be one of the best writers I have stumbled across in my time browsing FanFiction as a whole. I want to thank you again for taking your time to fashion such a story.
And hurray, Kaiser is back!
| MidsummerMoonlight99 chapter 37 . 3/15/2013
Neat chapter. I see poor Edie's past keeps coming into question, I can't wait to see if her past in the real world is fake or not or something crazy. So will Al-Cid have a bigger role in the story than he did in the game? Perhaps the rival for affection with Basch? Can't wait for the next chapter!
| joliechose151 chapter 37 . 3/15/2013
Sweet Ivalice, this story is *so* good. I can barely handle the epic-ness.
I'm so torn with this new development with Al-Cid. He's so suave and awesome, but...but...Edie/Marishka and Basch! They're so cute together!
You really have a way with words. I can't wait to see how everything turns out.
| skyfireflight16 chapter 37 . 3/14/2013
Wow, interesting plot twist! Too bad Kaiser got away from her; I was really looking forward to their reunion. I'm sure Edie's not a Witch like they think she is; that seems pretty obvious to me from what that book said about a Witch never fighting without her Daemon - Edie's never fought with her dog with her, from what I can remember, and she's done fine. Maybe every person in Ivalice has a double on Earth? But if so, who would Fran's twin be, since Viera don't exist on Earth? But I'm getting ahead of myself. Looking forward to your next chapter!