Reviews for Sorta Cinderella: xxxNote Chronicles style
Evenwoof chapter 4 . 9/8/2011
LOL! I feel soo terrified of Near right now. I mean, I can seriously imagine his creepy smile right now.. -shiver- I think Near-kun and BB-san should've been BFFs in the anime. I can totally imagine them playing with L-styled Barbie dolls, with Light-kun mind-raping one of the dolls in the backround. XD But, seriously. I. LOVE. THIS. FIC. So, you need to get your $$ back on FanFiction so you can finish this fic, so my life would be complete. Seriously. You can never have enough crossdressing Ls. XD

mpuayq chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
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There Was A Silence chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Kyaa! This is great! Honestly, I love it, the idea and the series your crossing over and the story itself and the characters and everything! XD the intro of all the characters, even if we already knew them, was good and funny. And then the third person part at the end really sets up for the rest of the story well. I'm so excited, great job!

herpaderp chapter 4 . 7/29/2010

I do hope you continue this, Near's version of Cinderella sounds amazing.
Eru chapter 4 . 6/9/2010
"Margie, I have been meaning to ask you something."

"What is it, Steven?"

"Will you…will you marry me, Margie?"

"Oh! Yes! Oh, Stevey, yes!"

"We'll be so happy together, Steven!"

"How could we not, Margie, when our love is so strong?"

"Oh, Steven!"

"Oh, Margie!"


Sorry, must have had a sugar overdose. That is so hilariously sappy! "Oh Steven!" "Oh Margie!" And Kurogane is listening to this! *Laughing my head off*

I forgot to mention in my previous review how much Mello sounded like a fangirl. KYAAAAA! I know he's supposed to be the tough guy, but the way he talked about L is soooo girly!

Nice! Update soon!
Eru chapter 3 . 6/9/2010

Anyways,(controls self) I LOVE TSUBASA AND I LOVE DEATHNOTE!

Great story here; just about summed up everything I love and had enough humor to keep me laughing out loud. L is obviously the best character in deathnote and Fai is obviously the best in tsubasa, and I was struck by their resemblance when you mentioned it.

I also love KuroFai pairings and LLight pairings, and you really captured Fai's past and his feelings well (King Ashura). You agree wth me on many things, including how Sakura is sweet and nice... but a bit too sweet and nice. Kind of brainless, you know. Actually kind of like Misa-chan if you think about it. And Syaoran is too plain and boring and too... makes feel a bit sick. Light about gives me the same feeling, but LLight pairings are great. Making Light so jealous and wanting L is funny though.

Anyways, LOL, loved it, continue writing!

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (Makes dramatic is ruined by me tripping over my own feet.)
Ashimattack chapter 3 . 4/24/2010


you need to continue.

yup yup.
Ashimattack chapter 2 . 4/24/2010

i wanna go read more THIS VERY SECOND but i will take the time to review because you deserve praise for the AWESOMENESS

i'll stop ranting and continue reading now.

Ashimattack chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
ah this is really good,

i love mello as narrator, he seriously just MADE the prologue and epilogues of another note...


this script is sounding awfully familiar...

d n angel?


doesn't matter, it's different


*goes to read more*
lL.ChAn chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
I liked the fic ...

Very cool

Please continue *-*
kirly chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Wow this is interesting.

I can't wait to see what happens next.
Jeantron chapter 2 . 9/13/2009
yayz! I love this story! It's Hyuu-tastic!
Hi chapter 2 . 9/12/2009
Hope u dont mind anon reviews - no account :)

Your story is pretty good so far - its made me smile at least (especially the fire-breathing rabbit-thing!)

Be motivated lol! I'm interested to read more! (And its hard to find funny stories on here!)
Arctic Bee chapter 3 . 8/8/2009
-shrug- Interesting.

I look forward to seeing more (: