WHAT?! NO KISS! WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME SO! I HAD SUCH HIGH HOPES! WHY DO THE FATES HATE ME SO!

Great chapter btw.

Goddammit when are they gonna kiss! You know I only read this for the romance.

Lol jokes. No, but seriously, that previous statement is 50% true. I also read it for the fighting, the bickering, the arguments and because it's really well written. This story rocks!
P.s I'm not sure if I was logged in or not but the previous review about curiosity was mine as well. Just thought I'd let you know. If you didn't already.

Hi! So firstly, I really like- no, LOVE- this fic. When I saw your reply to the Icecream Perveyor I had to find that review. I didn't find anything like it. Did you delete it or something? Because I really want to know. Not to laugh at you or anything, it's just- I'm too curious for my own good.
Seriously, I sometimes wonder how it would feel to write a flame. I never have, but I honestly have wondered. I'm glad I have some sense.
Anyway, I'm not here to talk about myself!
I do really love your fic, you do have a few grammayical mistakes but then- who doesn't? So yeah. I'm probably just rambling now. Seeya!

Scarlett:

awwww...sweet story! not to graphic, not to vague. very fluffy, but very sweet. awesome story!

love from,

AVchick5 3

this was a great story.

Aw! That was so sweet...especially the last chapter, of course. James is so cute, and so is Lily.

A couple things, though, mostly spelling. Professor McGonagall was spelled wrong every single time, I think, in the whole fic. Also, there were a few missing quotation marks, or some with spaces in odd places. I can't find an actual example right now, but they look kind of like this (hard to tell when someone is talking and when they're not).

Lily said" I wanted to blah, blah, blah, "and then she walked away.

See what I mean?

Anyway, I really liked the fic, and the way Lily was characterized. I thought James was sometimes a bit girly, but these instances were always addressed by one of the characters (usually Sirius, like his comment about the padded bra).

Well-written. Keep writing!

~Danni

teehee I was listening to Christmas Bells when I read that xD RENT rocks!

the only bit that was cory was the last line like "oh i'd do anything for her!" lol but it was really good shame i av to go to 2 parties now! ill read more as soon as i can shame im not allowed to print any more stuff!

wow i loved that! they're finally showing feeling for each other i loved the way you wrote that!it was so well done!

im telling u it was good! happy?

wow really kool love the way James doesn't no wot he's feeling lol but isn't it the sheiking shack?

really good i like your rita's character!

wow lol really FUNNY like the way you've used lines from HP like the Title! great!

this was really good just some mistakes Lynn said as she pulled Annie’s and Lynn’s hands, ? huh? At this isn’t the only match we’ll win. at? should be and right? hit behind the wall. ? hid? and wasn't James a seeker? really good story i enjoy reading it lol

kool