Reviews for Broken
tracylynn329 chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Happy New Year! I just read this through for the fifth time and I still LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it! Please update soon. TLC
TheMashley24 chapter 3 . 12/2/2012
I'm glad that you didn't make Edward the bad guy. I love how you kept Alice pretty true to form. A little more Emmett and Jasper dialogue would be nice.
TheMashley24 chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
Uggh gut wrenching! Keep up the brilliant work
TheMashley24 chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I'm coming over from Breathe Again, which by the way is the name of my favorite Sara Bareilles song (look it up), and i decided to give this a try because you are just brilliant! I have only ready one chapter and you have got your hook in me already :) I'm on to the next one...
KimiD chapter 12 . 11/7/2012
Whew at least we know the store is not going under. Our Mrs. Schaeffer is well provided for. I am sure her husband must have left her well provided for. Bella is so sweet her, almost like a daughter. And now she can properly take care of things at the store without having to stress over it. Yeah, james is popping up a lot... not sure that is a good thing. Will he try to hurt Bella, or Mrs. Schaeffer? Remains to be seen... A bit unnerving him being around, startling her "on accident" seems to me in order Not to do that he would let his presence be known so she did not get spooked... just sayin'
KimiD chapter 10 . 11/6/2012
.That! Asking her out for coffee, ' . interesting that he walked into Her store to look for books. Could it be fate, LOL or the only bookstore close by... LOL
KimiD chapter 9 . 11/6/2012
My, My seems Alice does not have a very high opinion of Edward and she definitely did Not have anything to do with 'Eddie' meeting Bella. They all seem to rally around her though and Bella considers them her closest friends. Poor Edward waking up in That kind of room... that would have made me dizzy, LOL
KimiD chapter 8 . 11/6/2012
Mrs. Schaeffer seems like a sweet woman and maybe getting on in years perhaps she'll will the store to Bella if she passes since she does not seem to have any family, at least that Bella knows of. James... seems he's already stalking her, even though he seems alright now, is he really or will something set him off, "if I can't have you no one is going to have you" kind of mentality. Guess we will just have to bide our time...see what happens.
KimiD chapter 7 . 11/6/2012
Yeah, he has no idea, I wonder when they are gonna let him know why she is so skitish... not that he really seems to care, or, is it him putting up a defence mechanism. Don't get too close, you do not want to get burnt again But then he is already weighing other girls against Bella... just sayin'
KimiD chapter 6 . 11/6/2012
Whoa, that was a scary encounter... I sure she had all kinds of mixed feelings seeing james again. And why didn't they notify her when he was released? He 'seems' to have calmed down some, but looks can be deceiving. She thinks Edward's hot but she is skitish and I am sure he is curious as to why. They seem to be able to talk pretty good to each other until he asked if she was seeing anyone... that put her walls up and sandbagging the edges as well. LOL
KimiD chapter 5 . 11/6/2012
Well it looks like we have come up to speed for 'Eddie'. A rather cynical Eddie at that. I guess you cannot blame him for his mentality after the fiascos he has had for relationships... But to discribe Bella as a cat lady and a frumpy librarian is comical Boy is he in for a surprise...
KimiD chapter 4 . 11/6/2012
Poor Edward, looking so hard for a dream that seems so elusive unattainable fractured just like his heart... Not an idiot, just a romantic, believing in something it was not time for him to find. I assume he just gave up after that... well, let's see where his head is now...
KimiD chapter 3 . 11/6/2012
Aha so james was the culprit! I was tossing jake around but had not really thought about james, although, he really would be the most likely source. I knew she got cut on the stomach from the fall on the coffee table but how did she get the scar on her neck? Was that where he bit her? Just really, really glad it was not Edward that was the mystery guy.
KimiD chapter 2 . 11/6/2012
Wow, you sure know how to describe a scene in detail... Nicely Done! I found myself rocking, trying to catch a breath as she was trying to escape! Thinking "thank God she got to the door" so she could yell for help. Very descriptive writing, I could picture all of it running through my head as it was happening. I am a very visual person and I tend to, especially with a good writer, 'see' like a movie running in my head when I am reading an especially well written scene in the story. I have to say you definitely had my attention once again...
KimiD chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Hmmm, there are a few things I did notice was that you give no description of the guy, you do not refer to him by his name and no mention is made of his family... so basically we have no idea who He is... but a very interesting beginning none the less. Definitely have my attention...
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