|Reviews for John and Delenn in Shan' Fal: The Day After|
| chibi-eladiel chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
And the last one (if I don't forget another one this time). I liked this one too, but something triggered me: As I remember, Delenn says in season 4 it is 49 rituals left to be married. I can't say by memory if it is before or after the shan'fal she says that, but, after all, what you wrote could have happened if we imagine the fact the ritual was pretty...hot.
| CW chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
In the real world, the door chime would have signalled the arrival of the food right in the middle of the fun.
| Nyt Yanse chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Brilliantly written, I had wondered if they'd 'done it' before Deconstruction, this is very believable!