|Reviews for Subtle Reminders|
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/22/2013
this is pretty elementary... might want to get a beta reader to help you with the plot, grammatical errors and trimming down of long running sentences
| Dearlady2002 chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
"It isn't so much as you wasting my time, but I think with your wit and your mind, you can solve this problem on your own. Miss Granger, you have something other students here do not possess and take for granite."
That last word should be "granted," not "granite."
| notwritten chapter 8 . 1/6/2010
Interesting reading. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)
| Kohana Moon chapter 8 . 1/6/2010
I like your story. Its different, I have a hard time believing Harry would let Hermione die. This is a boy that didn't want his friends to help him fight voldemort because he wanted to keep them safe? That is the only thing that confuses me...just a thought. Your story is unique. Good job!
| notwritten chapter 7 . 11/8/2009
Killing Hermione is not a good idea.
This has been interesting to read. Keep smiling. :-)
| BellasBeingBad chapter 7 . 11/8/2009
That was great; please update soon!
| lucy smith chapter 6 . 9/22/2009
omg - please please update
| notwritten chapter 6 . 9/19/2009
This has been interesting to read. Have a good day tomorrow. Keep smiling. :-)
| Heidi191976 chapter 6 . 9/19/2009
A great chapter. I look forward to the next one.
| pobrediabla chapter 5 . 8/29/2009
whoa, tragedy instead of romance? hmm, I don't know...
But I have to say I really liked these chapters, with Snape being...well, dark/hurt Snape? Though I'm not sure if it was a good idea to write the war-scenes (final battle, or just an attack on Hogwarts?). I think it'd be nice if the two developed some feelings for each other. I mean, it doesn't have to be 'I love you oh so much' at once, just some sort of deeper understanding (of which I can see now from Hermione's part), which would give hope for the future.
But, of course this is just my wish (hopelessly hopeless for happy endings:), do it as you wish, I hope you can get over your writer's block soon.
| georgiagurl chapter 4 . 8/26/2009
i LOVE the ss/hg paring! SNAPE IS SO SEXY! thanks for writing this its realy good! :p
| Heidi191976 chapter 5 . 8/24/2009
This was a great chapter. I look forward to the next one.
| Jinxie4 chapter 5 . 8/24/2009
Interesting battle, update soon.
| notwritten chapter 5 . 8/23/2009
Very interesting reading. Keep smiling. :-)
| x-EmilyTennant-x chapter 5 . 8/23/2009
E, I hate cliffies so much lol! I can't wait til the next chapter!