Reviews for Subtle Reminders
HERMIONEFAN1983 chapter 8 . 12/16/2014
why does hermione have to die? is it fake death? THE HEADMASTER IS EVIL
hermionefan1983 chapter 7 . 12/16/2014
better dead than alive? hermione? all to save harry for the war! that headmaster is THE monster NOT the dark lord (although the dark lord is too) and to have snape do it? and all to protect harry! FUCK THAT! and there excuse is to protect hermione! yeah right!
hermionefan1983 chapter 6 . 12/16/2014
harry and Dumbledore were devising a plan for HER death? WHAT?
hermionefan1983 chapter 6 . 12/16/2014
i thought she was still recovering from falling down the stairs so how can she fight Bella and how can she run to severus just then and why didnt anyone stop Bella (before severus did) from casting that spell? also why didnt hermione dance when asked to dance because of that spell? is she like harry who can resist it?
hermionefan1983 chapter 6 . 12/16/2014
Ron? i thought it was severus! thank god its not severus!
hermionefan1983 chapter 5 . 12/16/2014
who got hit with the killing curse severus or malfoy? hope malfoy!
hermionefan1983 chapter 5 . 12/16/2014
why didnt the headmaster know that there was death eaters in the school? surely he know EVERYTHING?
hermionefan1983 chapter 4 . 12/16/2014
snape was going to rape her and harry caught them?!
hermionefan1983 chapter 4 . 12/16/2014
why were they looking away from her? did snape rape her?
hermionefan1983 chapter 2 . 12/16/2014
did she really just hug him?
Guest chapter 8 . 9/22/2013
this is pretty elementary... might want to get a beta reader to help you with the plot, grammatical errors and trimming down of long running sentences
Dearlady2002 chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
"It isn't so much as you wasting my time, but I think with your wit and your mind, you can solve this problem on your own. Miss Granger, you have something other students here do not possess and take for granite."

That last word should be "granted," not "granite."
notwritten chapter 8 . 1/6/2010
Interesting reading. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)
Kohana Moon chapter 8 . 1/6/2010
I like your story. Its different, I have a hard time believing Harry would let Hermione die. This is a boy that didn't want his friends to help him fight voldemort because he wanted to keep them safe? That is the only thing that confuses me...just a thought. Your story is unique. Good job!
notwritten chapter 7 . 11/8/2009
Killing Hermione is not a good idea.

This has been interesting to read. Keep smiling. :-)
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