Reviews for Second Start |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love ths story so much can you continue it |
![]() ![]() I loved this story. Pleaseeee update soon |
![]() ![]() I think this story is actually good but I have to say this because it’s actually annoying me! His dad used to beat him and his mom okay! Just because he gave up alcohol it doesn’t make the past better. It makes no sense that he would forgive his dad so easily and forgive his mom because in his first life she stayed with an abusive drunk that squandered all their money left which in turn left Severus with old clothes that had holes in them and hungry when he came home from school because the dad used it for ALCOHOL! I’m not saying the dad didn’t change or that I don’t want them to be happy but I feel like your just brushing away years of abuse like nothing happened. Like all the dad said to Severus was oh hehe I’m sorry I abused you and never showed you any love let’s forget that I’ve done that and now be the perfect family. Also the mom is really annoying me she wants to act all tough now and he such a good mom and “I’ll do anything for my baby’s because I love them soooo much” like bro in his first life you stayed with an abusive drunk that hurt you and your child. I just don’t understand how Severus can forget all that pain but remember the pain James Potter and his friends gave him. |
![]() ![]() Sirius to slytherin? Thats some classic Snake arogance not learning his lesson. This man had no sense of cunning or ambition. Thousands of ways to clear his name and took none of it. Stupid bravery to chase after pettigrew, and let's be honest Snape was repsonible for Lily's death. Why does he hate sirius at all, when he saved him from remus? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would love to see more chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I finally caught up to the current chapter, hope you update soon, I know it's been a year, and you probably have a lot of responsabilities. |
![]() ![]() ![]() pretty crazy, I wonder what you wanna do with voldemort's child |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn, at least wallburga its in a mental facility now, lets juts hope she cant get kreacher to do more stuff |
![]() ![]() ![]() let's see where it goes with Remus |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh crap, so she did it, never would've thought that sirius mom posioned severus |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow, oh wow, they did the deed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit, a child goddamn |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh oh, dang, poor Severus, acquiring a lot of allergies because of a plant |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow, what an ass on her part to do that to her daughters |
![]() ![]() ![]() It really feels like out of nowhere, let's see what kind of importance it has |