You are wrong. You are a very good action writer. The action in front of the bank proves that. The idea of shooting stunners into a mirror was impressive, I’ve not seen that done before.

I was honestly surprised by how much I loved this story. It was definitely a different take on things with the horcruxes not existing and an addition to the prophecy. The way things worked out with the family heirlooms was also well done. I especially liked how Harry gained some of the necessary knowledge from the wand. I also really enjoyed how Harry and Ginny's relationship developed. The explanation about his infatuation with Cho was genius and perfect for the plot. The ending was unexpected but perfect as well. I wasn't expecting the whole thing about the ritual keeping Voldemort tethered to the mortal realm. I also wasn't expecting the way Harry and Ginny went about to save the souls used in his place. Of course the fact Harry ended up building a large family due to it all just worked. The small epilogue was also wonderfully done, however I do wish you had mentioned how many children Harry and Ginny ended up having.

Trust me, you don’t have to “lean” toward evil Snape.

Sure, he was fighting against voldie but let’s face it, he only did so because of his creepy obsession with Lily. He treated her son atrociously and was an allround horrible person.

He definitely deserved to die.

I never, ever care why a Headbastard is a head BASTARD.

I only care that he is one.

I pray for the deaths of all such.

I know that it has been years since this story was completed, but I only recently came upon it. Wonderful! This has to be my favorite Harry/Ginny story of all time.

Thanks do much.

Thanks, it was a beautiful story, a wonderful love.

I enjoyed your story immensely, thank you for sharing

I love how everyone helped in their own way. I love the way you wrote each characters strengths and weaknesses. I like that Harry wasn’t all powerful but needed help to complete this. The loyalty and love is what makes it so great. Kudos

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Best Harry Potter story I've ever read. Don't think there will ever be one as good!

Ron the hypocrite with how many times hes hurt Hermione he was no right to say anything he has no idea about the stuff Harry's going threw.

Ik this is supposed to be a AU but Ginny was the exact opposite of being rejected by boys all the boys liked her and wanted to date her.

You are one heck of a story writer. This was superb. Spellings and punctuation dodgy at times, but nothing that a good proof reader and a top class software uploader couldn’t fix. Extremely well done.

an enjoyable read, thank you.

Good story but wouldn't Hermione's parents and the Ginny's parents hear the commotion going on and wonder what is happening and come to investigate?