Stumbled onto this. It's and interesting story. It's a shame you never went further with it. Great writing!

blessed!

You made me ship these two so hard. So thanks for giving me an undying need for Rumble/Starscream. Great job with the fic! You write all these characters so well

I hope you know I cried reading this, this confession was just so satisfying, and Starscream's refusal to believe it was just so... *clenches fist*

I also hope you know you've gotten me deep into this pairing, to the point where I'm drawing fanart of it now. And it takes a lot for me to draw fanart of only outside my main otp. lol

I know this was last updated in frekain 2011 but... I'll still cross my fingers for another chapter. I really want to see if Starscream "dumps" Megatron after this, and how he reacts to being shown up by a little cassette.

Way cool story

One comment per chapter, so I will comment you AGAIN on your previous chapter.
Continueeeeee! I read it again and I love it so much. Besides, the ending you left us is amazing and now I just really wanna see how things will turn out. I wanna see Starscream commit and totally run Sounwave over. I wanna see him get his head off his ass and damn fight for this! Besides, after such an love confession, I just really, really need more.
If you ever need any help, editing, writing, someone to talk to, anything, just contact me, ok. All my previous promises still stand from previous comment.
I'll do anything. I know this story is "old" and that you have probably lost all inspiration and muses and interest and what not, and I really know how hard it is to finish a story you left behind and gave up on. It took me several years of hiatus for me to finish my story "take your medicine", but I promise you that the feeling you get when it is finally done and published far outweights the quilt of not having it done. I know it is a pain to open a new document and starting to write a story which plot and characters feel almost hopeless, but that is just one aspect of being a writer. Writers write. They create their own world, mold it mend it to their will, make it to their image, creating something great. It is your story and you can still pull it up and make it better. You can still finish it. And another thing I can swear on is that even after all these years your readers have not abondoned you. Some may have moved on, but some are still there. Always there. I got many readers coming back to me and thanking me for finishing the story. And it is my readers who got me to finish the story in the first place. I needed help editing, and they helped me pull my act together.
so please continue this story. It is amazing. It is one of my favorites. It has an amazing plot and I just adore Rumble.
If you ever need a friend or help with this story, don't be afraid to seek it. You are awesome, and so is your story.
I admire you.
you are awesome.

When the day this update, it will be one of the best days my life lol

Don't you fragging dare stop this story!
I have been teetering on and off on the plot, going absolutely crazy with feels, begging it was M but taking it in like it's a fragging drug. (not everyone can/want to do explicit, sometimes it is not needed, and I totally respect your boundaries, and T is just fine.)
Do you need a kidney? Coz' I got a spare one. Do you need a concubine, coz' I'm right here. I would do anything, please, just continue this story!
Do I need to write you some rumble and starscream, coz' if it gets you back to writing this, then fine! I'm opening open office right now!
I adore the plot. I adore the feels, I feel like smashing soundwave's face on the goddamn floor (I love that fucker but man, chill the fuck down). I want to bitchslap starscream because goddamnit are you blind?
I want to hug rumble and hang from his feet like dead weight.
I want to beg megatron to just fucking zip it.
This story has it all, the plot, the feels, everything. I want it, I need it, please, please get back to writing.
I cannot express my feelings enough. I need this. I love this. I want it injected straight in to my vein.

I cannot express my feels enough, I tried, I really did. Please feel for me. I sure feel for this story. You are an amazing writer when it comes to feelings, and I'm a sucker for that.
Please do not abandon this! I beg of you. I shamelessly beg of you, on my knees, head pressed on the floor, mouth spewing nonsense, hand grasping your ankle. Please don't leave.

Wow. I gotta say, I never even heard of this paring before your story, so the summary peaked my interest. But now, you've got me on this ship "come sail away with me" indeed. Excellent job! Please update once more when you are inspired to do so again.

Such a rare pairing...really hope you return to finish this!

This story is so well written! It's been awhile since I last read it (but not too long) and I still find myself getting sucked right back in, effortlessly. I really do hope you consider continuing it!

AWWWW, this story is one of the BEST, rare shipping stories I've ever had the pleasure to read. Its only a shame it isn't completed... Or IS it? This does leave it off at a nice high note, but... a lot of things aren't resolved yet.

Hopefully one day you'll pick this little gem up again? I'll be keeping an eye out for when that happens

I had never thought about the idea of Starscream and Rumble until I found this story and read it. You make them adorable.
I look forward to more
LadyB

Hola me encanta la historia, vas a continuarla o ya se acabo?
espero que actualices pronto
Saludos

Love this story so much - really hopeful you'll be updating it again! Pretty please?