Reviews for Reality Check
frenchygirl chapter 69 . 2/22/2010
this story is so hot please an other chapter very soon and a threesome or foursome so sex!
louisa78 chapter 32 . 2/4/2010
This has to be the hottest story I have ever read, very much like our lovely Telkena writes. Excellent makes a dreary day seem so much better, and there is even a plot there somewhere, which I am sure that you are getting back to. Keep up the good work. Look forward to more.
dp chapter 62 . 1/2/2010
Nice chapter. What happens next?
dp chapter 54 . 11/29/2009
More please.
dp chapter 51 . 11/28/2009
Still reading. Thanks.
Rac80 chapter 4 . 9/1/2009
cute story and loved the line: "they hurried across the space and waited like little puppy dogs for his next...command"
dp chapter 8 . 8/15/2009
Very nice chapter.
dp chapter 3 . 8/4/2009
Excellent. Looking forward to more.
sapphtastic chapter 3 . 8/3/2009
I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this!

I like your Jack. He is doing a good job of keeping his humor in a stressful situation, and he exudes that ... stubbornness we all know and love.

Keep it up!
pamdill chapter 2 . 8/3/2009
I did not read this story when you had posted it originally so desperate for you to upload the next chapters to see what happens to Jack
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