Reviews for Love and Friendship
Great chapter 1 . 1/23/2016
So far i like the story. The only problem i have is its a little hard to read. i feel if you went over it again and fixed all the mistakes it would be easier. I can't wait to read more and find out the rest of the story! Keep making more stories!
Guest chapter 32 . 8/23/2014
This story is really good but your grammer and spelling makes it really difficult to read. All you need is a beta and this story would be one of my favourites
Liz 1974 chapter 32 . 6/5/2013
Annabell u kill me please say u r going to write more :)
Guest chapter 32 . 1/11/2013
loventherussian17 chapter 32 . 9/7/2012
Great loved it
Fred's Hermione chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
i have to say i havent found many emmett and bella stories that have caught my eye but this one did and let me say this i love it
lilroses123 chapter 2 . 2/10/2011
I'm sorry but your grammar and spelling is so bad its difficult to read, painful almost. I suggest getting a beta cause I love the idea but it needs a lot of cleaning up and I think having someone to help you with that would be a tremendous idea and probably help with the development a bit.
foxylady1on1 chapter 17 . 8/8/2010
look i am not being mean but... your plot story is really very good i am enjoying it but... your spelling and some times your grammer is not so good could you please get a bata cause at times i am finding it really hard to read and i don't want to stop reading cause like i said story plot is quite good. thanks
inveiglee chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
This is so so difficult to read. I could barely even understand the summary. Please get a beta reader.
EmmettsBlondeBabe chapter 32 . 3/15/2010
Ha wow, 5 kids! I think I only want 3 maybe 4...but not 5...WOW! I loved your story, very well written :D
Darkness isn't always bad chapter 32 . 3/15/2010
loved the story! D
sweetestchik163 chapter 10 . 3/3/2010
the story so far is cute.. but its makes it a little dif to read with the mistakes... But everything is really good
NikoleMasen chapter 4 . 2/9/2010
I'm enjoying this story but its a little hard to read with the grammar.
lovinglife2010 chapter 32 . 2/8/2010
love it
greywolflove chapter 32 . 2/7/2010
very good story. will there be a sequel?
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