|Reviews for The Grey Warrior|
| light ladybug chapter 8 . 3/27/2013
well hope that's going well and all but i really hope you update soon! hope all is well!
| PGHammer chapter 2 . 2/7/2011
Now, this is cute - Harryhappens upon some harpies (and *not* from Holyhead!) rampaging in Diagon Alley (with Minotaur help) and while his guardian deals with the harpies, he takes on, and down, that pesky Minotaur and finds out who sent him, rescuing, among others, a gaggle of Aurors, including our favorite NymphaDarling. Naturally, Fudge and Umbitch don't like to see anyone looking good other than the Ministry, so they try to make trouble (mostly Dolores, who winds up making a real-estate deal in East London's suburbs - oh, please; did you really think that Occassus was going to let Umbitch live?). Fudge tries to next sic the Aurors on Harry and his help; Amelia and certain Aurors are having none of it! In fact, Amelia says "I'm done!" and accompanies Harry and company into Gringott's, along with Ragnok and a gaggle of goblins (acting as extra guards). Okay - now what will Harry do with an Amourous!Amelia?
| Alastor Wolfkin chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
anti-christian much? i agree (though im not quite as venomous as you). red skin and horns are last century. White business suits, fedoras, and black roses are today's Satan! but chaotic hair and a shit-eating grin work just as well, even better with the two hellish chicks!
| Flyte28 chapter 8 . 10/19/2010
Ha i almost cursed u to hell and bk when i saw the discontinued part :D, then i saw the rest, can wait for the remake, this seem really good a bit fast pasted and confusing but good.
| Change of Faith chapter 8 . 9/3/2010
Forget he editig and continue with the story!1
| Change of Faith chapter 4 . 9/2/2010
The battle to me seemed...cheesy truthfully sowwey D:
| Change of Faith chapter 2 . 9/2/2010
WHo dropped the minatour off the mountain?
| Change of Faith chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
This is the most orginal story I have ever seen...AND IM LOVING IT!
| Gandalf the Grey-Edelweiss chapter 8 . 8/31/2010
But... but... The story is amazing! I see nothing wrong with it! I'd wish you would just update it... Oh well
| nightwing27 chapter 8 . 8/31/2010
can't wait to start on my stories I will never change anything unlike others I write for myself and not for others to be happy
| nightwing27 chapter 7 . 8/31/2010
wow their back but I hope they don't go against their son and side with that gay old fool I hope they support him
| JMLuna chapter 8 . 8/30/2010
If you had discontinued this I'd have to have hit you upside the head with a giant cookie. But seriously, this is one of the most original H/Hr stories I've come across and can't wait for more.
| namingsucks chapter 8 . 8/30/2010
I hate you so much right now. Really didn't see James and Lily coming back. You really through us a curve ball there. Now I really wish we had some more info on Samael but I guess I'll have to wait for you to finish editing the first 7 chapters.
| Aries The Ram chapter 2 . 8/29/2010
*smirks* that was highly entertaining. Though I'm unsure whether its possible that Harry and Occasus can be having so many issues with a simple Minotaur and Harpies. In some ways I think it would be better for Kubo to have more allies than simply Loki, unless it would be awkward that Louis hasn't yet dominated the universe seeing as he claims to have the help as the origin's as well.
| Aries The Ram chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Well this certainly was an enjoyable chapter. I can't see why sensible Christians would have an issue with this, its still just fiction, and your an atheist anyway so its not like we can say you think this is real. lol, besides it seems as though you haven't gone and made Harry all demonic evil, so kudos for that.
Interesting though, it was almost like dualism in a way, or taoism. Balance and everything.
Many people have an issue reading fiction they don't "agree with" but I call that idiocy, I can read Earthsea and other fantasy fiction without having to agree with it's religious views, I mean that would practically shove me away from reading sci-fi as well and I can't have that.
Good chapter, reading on and looking forward to more.