Reviews for Proffessor Layton and the lazer beams of death and
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
INTREEGING says professor layton.
L.O.L
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
Wow this is kinda like Shadowperson666 and thetruthfulperson. Spelling and punctuation wise. I think this should be taken down immediately.

ANYWAY, the actual story is funny, love the idea of lazers in a layton game :D

But still, even if it takes nuts to post this, I still think that it needs to be taken down. Seriously.
PRETTY KITTY 500 chapter 2 . 12/6/2010
What the Heck!

No offence, but this is totally wacky.

I can't read a single sentence without having to really think.

This isn't like any story I've read, more like a puzzle.

Next time, use the correct punctuation or don't write at all.

It'd be better if you put all effort in this, because this looks like you haven't even tried!

Not Happy \/ !

00 !

-PRETTY KITTY 500.
MagellinaFluffQueen chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
I will try to say this nicely: this makes absolutely no sense, it's impossible to read. Why would you type it like that? It could be a decent story if you used proper punctuation and spelling.
thebestestwritr chapter 2 . 8/11/2010
Use grammar, my fine sir.
midorema chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
I'm surprised this is actually here, but it's kind of amusing that you posted it, totally unaware and not reading the guidelines. Unless you did it on purpose. Kudos to you if you did. That's pretty jackass.

But still.
DeadAccount-ClickMeforDetails chapter 2 . 9/26/2009
Dudes, old Johnny boy is a blatant troll.

Not that I have a problem with that. If he listed this story as a parody, it would have given it all away.

There's no hope for any troll trying to be the next My Immortal- it just won't happen.

But anyway, funny story. I have to read Part I.

MAKE IT SNAPPY!
Beijing Express chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
You should be ashamed.

Fucking ashamed.
BritAnon chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
What can I say? I seriously lol'd :'D
Heh chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
XD
I Love Lasers LOL chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
God all you commenters are actually reatarded.

This is called a troll, a joke.

You took it way too seriously dumbasses.
randomgenius chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
You mispelled practically every word in this story, and then some.
Evilsingingllama chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
What can I say?

I LAUGHED when I read this. You need punctuation, you need the right spellings.

I was SURPRISED that I could actually read this.
I LUV LAZERZ LOL chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
OMG BEST STROY EVA, I LUV IT CNA U RITE SUM MRE, LAYTON WUZ SO RAEL HER N I LUVD LUKS SMARTYNES

2 ALL FO U DAT DONT LKE THIS STROY U CNA CUM N FUCK A DONKY
greengirlblue chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Darn those evil aileen roberts.

I do think you should maybe go back and at least put some proper punctuation in there somewhere... or formatting... or fewer CAPS LOCK... because I thought it was actually a sort of funny. Extraordinarily hard to read to the point of this-beyond-ridiculous, but funny.

Poor world. Exploding laser beams of death are just not cool.
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