Reviews for Love Hate relationship
AmIreallyarodent chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Whoa! All that squabbling just for a simple fact like that! Who would've thought?
labellie chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
lol XD I'm with Jack on this marmite is horrible D:
aussieflugel chapter 1 . 8/3/2009

Go Jack!

Vegemite is so much better.

Aside from some minor grammar issues, a pretty good piece. Next time, go through and fix the capitals on your pronouns. It's worth it to be a better writer, because people are more likely to take you seriously about your work. A piece that has a capital missing from the title, and another from the summery does not scream 'READ ME' in the least.

And Marmite, as a trademark, needs a capital also.

Kugs and hisses, and keep on writing!

NO-PANTIES chapter 1 . 8/3/2009

good lil jack (*give cookie to jack*)