Reviews for Untouchable Innocence
Guest chapter 2 . 7/20
Aaaaah~ k-k-k...KAWAII! Aaaaaahhh... SasoDei~
CitrusFlag chapter 2 . 6/12/2013
xcuse me while I read and worship this smutty fic over and over again XD That was amazing :D Great job on the fic!
gaara'sGurl101 chapter 2 . 12/11/2011
he should puinish deidara with toys lol
gaara'sGurl101 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
good inspiration and very interesting i enjoyed it almost had a nose bleed lol
LawlietLover1 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Hahaha I screamed when I saw this your an amazing writer I love your work you inspire me :D
DeeaE chapter 2 . 7/30/2010
CloudsOfRabbits chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
Amazing! As always! XD
I love your authors notes, "I would apologize, but you see...I'm not sorry.". Best quote ever.
Koolkatk9 chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
i loved this story! so far i love all the stories of yours that i have read! you are on my favs now!
The Bottled Optimist chapter 2 . 9/18/2009
Wow, this was written really well, I refuse to call this a Lemon because that sounds to childish a word to describe this. This was incrdible to read and one of my favorite pairings in Naruto. The perspective was great and you certainly know how to make a reader blush in awe.

MelloxChocolate chapter 2 . 9/17/2009
very hot story! write more!
black55widow chapter 2 . 9/11/2009
Ice cubes are so cool!
Siffel chapter 2 . 9/10/2009
And yay for perversion and pedophiles!

As creepy as that is, I'm enjoying it way more than I should be. Keep up the awesome work! I'd really like a third installment of this! Please?
TheCupcakeMonster chapter 2 . 9/10/2009
WOW. Deidara can pull pants down with his feet. That's truly a skill to be appreciated

I can't get enough shota...I'm a junkie, just like Sasori. We should get together some time XD

YAY FOR CHAPTER TWO! You totally made my day. I want to go write more SasoDei now...maybe I should update Camera Shy o.O

OH WEL. There can only be so much SasoDei greatness on the net...and I think you got that covered
TheNarator chapter 2 . 9/10/2009
hehehe, yay, dialogue in this chapter! you know you write smut so well, love love loved it!
MiyuCat chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
It was really good! I'm not too into shota, but you made it really enjoyable to read. The lemon was tasteful and realistic, even though it was so kinky! Good work x
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