Reviews for Quiet Magics |
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![]() ![]() Oh, Happosai! You never learn, do you? |
![]() ![]() Aha! Hotaru's rescuer has finally woken up. I wonder what will happen next. |
![]() ![]() I despise Xian Pu. Like Akane, she's extremely violent, and doesn't know the meaning of subtlety. |
![]() ![]() Hotaru and Ranma make a great team. And she'd make a much better wife for Ranma than the excessively violent Akane Tendo. |
![]() ![]() This is a disappointing ending to what started out as a good story. |
![]() ![]() OH, BOY! If ever Sailors Jupiter and Mercury ever needed Ranma's help, chaos magnet or not, it would definitely be now! |
![]() ![]() LIKE I SAID, I HAVE ALWAYS CONSIDERED RANMA SAOTOME AND HOTARU to be an ideal couple. Whereas Akane is excessively violent and Nabiki is manipulative, Happosai is a threat. Hotaru is sweet and self-effacing. And when Ranma says that Happosai isn't going to be a problem for much longer, he usually means it. It's nice to see that Hotaru can deal with Ranma's curse and accept it. Watch out, Happosai, Ranma's gunning for you. |
![]() ![]() Hotaru Tomoe would make a MUCH BETTER wife for Ranma Saotome than the insanely violent Akane Tendo. Hotaru is like Kasumi in many respects. Let me outline some of them. 1: She is kind. 2: She has few friends. 3: She is regarded as an outsider due to her dangerous power-a power. Ranma is also regarded as an outsider, due to (A) his Jusenkyo curse, which his mother refuses to accept is Genma's fault, no, it's Ranma's fault, always. Hotaru is also like Kasumi in these respects.4: She is helpful. 5: She is caring. 6: She finds solace with Ranma, seeing in him a kindred spirit, as none of them are cared for unconditionally. |
![]() ![]() My name is Maitland. JOHN MAITLAND. I am very good at killing people. Others have called me a Devil or Death. I AM A PROFESSIONAL. I NEVER MISS MY TARGETS. But I really despise Chinese Amazons. I killed 35,OOO in WW2, and 45,OOO in the Vietnam War. That makes my death toll 90,000. If Xian Pu is not careful, I will slay her. And I never joke about such things. |
![]() ![]() I CAN UNDERSTAND MICHIRU AND HARUKA'S CONCERN OVER Ranma Saotome using Sailor Saturn's Silence Glaive, since it is quite lethal. But as Hotaru herself said, "I think it works differently for him than it does for me". I myself have to agree. Ranma HAS fought many, many, many enemies, and yes, he IS quite powerful, but I doubt he has the power to destroy the world. Destroy DEMONS? Certainly. Destroy the world? No. Ranma wouldn't do that. |
![]() ![]() Hmmm. I wonder how Haruka, Michiru and Setsuna will react to the fact that Ranma saved the life of Hotaru? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This could turn into a good story, but there is not enough here to say for sure. One change I'd recommend is to go ahead and make Hotaru the same age as Ranma. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of those fan fiction that I go back to and read every so often, I enjoy it every time especially the first fight scene I always really liked the descriptions for the fight |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was fun, but it's sad to see it's as dead as poor Yuki at the end, there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, this is really good! You strike a delightful balance between appropriately horrifying monsters and a lack of purple prose when it comes to describing them, which I really enjoy! I also like how you've dealt with the characters, especially the split between Hotaru/the Silence. It's not something I've seen before, but It really worked with the 'creeping horror' kind of fight that she was trapped in, to give it a bit more tension to the stakes while not nerfing the Silence's power any. Looking forward to future updates! |