|Reviews for In Which There is Bonding|
| Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Ha! Is there more to it? I hope so!
| Azrael Jinsei chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
This is really good, thank you so much for writing it.
| Beautiful Jade chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Hreat Story. I love all the stories you write. I like the beginning when Toph and Suki were planning to get Zuko and Katara together. Keep it up and expect getting a review from me from In Which There Is Denial. Bye!
| bloodyrose1294 chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
NARUTO! YES! Naruto is one of my other favorites, so it's all good that you kinda sorta combined the two.
Heh. You gotta love Toph.
| ticking-clocks8 chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
I love this whole mini series! My question is why you haven't combined these into one huge story? I enjoy the thoughts and symbolisms you put in behind each and every action/thing that appears. AH! NARUTO AWESOMENESS! :P
| Aimlessly Unknown chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
ah itachi, a great warrior we should all recognize as the almighty master...-squeezes itachi plushie- WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DIE! -puts plushie away hastily- well now that my fangirl moment is over with lets get on to reviewing your wonderful story shall we?
First off, as confusing as it is to tell who is who [well not in this one but in the others seeing as this is kind of a collective review], the first section (with all the dialouge) is friggin hilarious! Toph going off in that detailed repore trying to describe how Sukki walks and then getting interrupted is genius. Now let me ask you something. No, its not to read my stories, god knows how many people ask you that :] no this is more of a how the hell do you manage to write so well. Like in Avalon Blood and Year One: The Academic, how do you get ever word to draw a picture in the mind of every person who reads it? I mean its just not fair to most of the people here. lol jk I'm glad you write like that. Now then. Black Empress...it fits :P Jun is just plain awesome i must say. Why is Aang constantly hit on the head though. Not literally of course but metaphorically. First, he loses Katara to Zuko (and i am all for that) but are you going to write a story where it shows Toph and him and the life they have?
Wonderful as usual MoS-san.
| Asabella chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Just awesome, what more can I say?
| afitre chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Aw, Aang's not such a bad guy.
| SporadicInsanity chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Aw... I just wanted to give Zuko a hug... But I think Katara's method works better.
I was spazzing during the almostsomething!scene. 3 Omg. No, Aang, WHY? D:
Again, love all the symbolization. ]
And Toph and Suki rock. Seriously, they're all so enjoyable to read.
Can't wait for the next one!
| katdemon1895 chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
once again absolutely awesome, the zutaraness made me squeal like the zutara fangirl that i am and toph is just plain awesome and i adore her, the black empress rather fits jun for a nickname and lol to suki trying to be all noble about why she's trying to help along the relationship between zuko and katara, which you write beautifully
the symbolism that you put into the stories is subtle and utterly fantastic! i love the deliberate choice of color and of flowers and everything, absolutely brilliant
lol to katara poking zuko in the forehead ala the uchiha brothers, itachi was indeed awesome and kudos on the homage to him, black lotus ops does sound very cool naruto is a good fandom, lets keep our fingers crossed though so naruto will accept and return hinata's feelings!
yay for st. jun giving you inspiration, looking forward to what you come up with next
| AshenSoul chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
wow, i love your work, it always cracks me up, and is totally the patron saint of Zutarians, as she was the first, whoo, lovin' the TotallyUp4It!Suki and SadisticToph. (you should write a story about her and Azula)
I think that if you put the connotations of certain feature, prehaps just the colour, at the start, then the story would prehaps make more sense, as ocassionaly, i become confused with whom is involved in the conversation, but you do charictarisation so well, i alwas work it our pretty sharpish
AshenSoul - (you fellow worshipper of /Sarcasum)
| tomboy14 chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
I've been waiting for Aang to unwittingly take revenge on Zuko and pull an epic cockblock D
| lazyguy90 chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Bloody fantastic. Awesome work on this. I'm looking forward to tomorrow's story. Keep it up.
| orphan12345 chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
I loved it!