|Reviews for During|
| Rast chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
EIP was *easily* my least favorite episode (and not just because of the miscommunication between Katara and Aang in regards to her 'confusion' crap, but also because she seemed very out of character in her treatment of him there) and I love reading rewrites/additions that make the horrible thing better. This was very nicely done. I though their kiss was especially well written, and something about the fact that Aang had to stand on his toes to kiss her was very endearing, and I really liked that you added that.
| peanutbuttergirl1997 chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
I like it. I'm glad you had katara kiss aang and stuff. I hate how katara was all confused in the real episode, than aang kissed her (oh, aang.) and she ran off.
| Opaul chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
that last line...interesting XD days I wish my mind was not in the gutter. Well I am the one that dragged it there -_-
anyway. Wonderful story fits in perfectly.
| Alastor Vega chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Only alittle weird. I also have trouble with Titles. Any way, man that cave scene will always haunt Aang. And I think I said this befroe but I say it again, Teenage love what a heartache. I guess it can be alittle confusing for Katara. Well great job as always and Have a NIce Day.