Reviews for Watching
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2016
Awesome you could totally make a fanfic out of this
lilbobcatgrl88 chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
️️Great :)
Yet Another Girl chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Well, hot damn! Slap my face and call me Bob, but who knew they came so desperate nowadays! (Sorry, practicing a new accent... :).)
FangDragon15005 chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
This is so believable! I absolutely love it!

Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
semantics chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
not much non con, more like a dub con.

hmmm last line freaky O_O
Onyx-Jade chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Really good story... I like how you build up the emotions and that Hermione tells Draco to be careful at the end... Lovely :)
HP0247 chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Loved the ending of this short...this one is the best so far that I've read.
hotbritt5000 chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
This is good for many reasons :D One - it's simple but it's still freaking brilliant. Two - Your characterisation of Draco and Hermione not only in this fic but also other stories is top notch. Three - You finished this fic in a way that still connects with the main topic and how the story came about, unlike something that is completely random.

You've probably heard all this before but all well :) Great job!
The Crimson Sheath chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
I loved this story. That's an extremely crappy review, but it's the truth. I must say though that I loved how you ended it without ending it. I mean, there was no happily ever after. I just...was...and I liked that. Thoroughly enjoyable. :D
TerraFire36 chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
You have so much potential, but you just need to connect your sentences. The paragraphs are choppy and almost difficult to read, so just connect sentences, use commas, get a beta, anything.

Your writing is too good to go to waste. ]
good-lads chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
loved it3.
Jenn Hoffmann chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
Good job! I like the idea-it's simple, and it works, because it's not too complicated a piece. Nicely written as well! Keep up the good work. ~Jenn
Katie Robinson chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
damn! this is hot! keep it up :P
Loony Luna Fan chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
Okay okay, I had to read just one more before going to bed...

I liked this one...

I'm not generally one for darker themes, but you sort of sprinkled it in there and it fit well...

Another fantastic job!

Ellae chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Scary. But artfully written (and that isn't as patronizing as it unfortunately came out as!)

Smokin hot.

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