|Reviews for Spies and Angels Don't Match|
| ick chapter 2 . 10/17/2009
i read ch 2 to see if it got better. it didn't max and them look like wimps. max would never put her flock in danger by allowing them to get near people who could overpower them. and isn't max supposed to be indestructable? your making the hero a damsel in distress you jerk!
| ick chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
hate it. max is way cooler than a couple of stupid witches. and she would never just tell people she didn't know who she was. and if she did they should have told her the truth too!
| MysteryNoName chapter 7 . 8/15/2009
O.M.G . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
AND YES I DID TIPE ALL THAT! NOW WHER WAS I? O I REMEMBER!
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| MysteryNoName chapter 6 . 8/15/2009
| MysteryNoName chapter 5 . 8/15/2009
im still a BIG FAN!
| MysteryNoName chapter 4 . 8/14/2009
the flocks powers are (p.s iv onlyread the first book!):
max:creepy voice in head
angel:mind reader/breath under warter/in fluwents peps to do stuff
nuge: can find suff out by tuchind the objeks
all flock has:a graet sens of direkshen
i kant remember eni thing els
P.S. i still LOVEE ur story
| MysteryNoName chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
I THINK THAT ONE OF THE WITCHES SHOULD GET A CRUSH ON ONE OF THE FLOCK LIKE IGGY OR FANG OR EVEN MABY ARI!
| MysteryNoName chapter 2 . 8/14/2009
if i rememberrite the school is in califonia i think!
by the way i still LOVE YOU STORY !
| MysteryNoName chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
iv read one chapter and i LOVE it and by the way the flok heir coloer is:
| alexa35 chapter 3 . 8/5/2009
It's okay to make mistakes, one has to make mistakes in order to learn. I myself have made slipups in the past, but I've learned.
Anyway, great chapter. Interesting to know that the twins can talk in different languages. Are you going to explain about the witches and the origins, etc? Just wondering.
Anyway, creative yes. Keep writing. Glad to see you update rather quickly. :D
| LovelyNBlue chapter 3 . 8/5/2009
this is a creative idea i hope you update soon
| alexa35 chapter 2 . 8/4/2009
That was good. Not bad at all, I must admit. However, I personally feel that Liza and Lily should have a weakness, something, or else they'll turn right into Mary Sues who can do everything with their spells.
Great job, keep writing, update soon. :D
| alexa35 chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
That was a great start to your story.
By the way - I just HAD to point this out, sorry - It's disappeared, not desappeared.
Besides that, awesome start. Keep writing. :D