|Reviews for Valek's Poison Study|
| Guest chapter 24 . 3/10
BRILLIANT! Your doing so well to capture valeks feelings! A few spelling mistakes here and there but all in all great!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/5
You're stopping there?!
| a chapter 18 . 1/17
you should definitely write for books in valek's pov like MAGIC STUDY
| A chapter 16 . 1/17
Its good, continue writing :)
| Nikki chapter 24 . 4/20/2016
I loved the entire story...pls pls continue
| Writerascii chapter 24 . 3/11/2016
You do an excellent job of writing with Valek's POV. It doesn't seem as if it is some other character. Please update.
| Guest chapter 24 . 1/12/2016
Keep going. Please.
| Mon chapter 24 . 12/18/2015
I love this story so much! You've really done great work :) any chance u still have those updates saved somewhere? I'd love to read more!
| EndlessHavoc chapter 24 . 10/9/2015
This is a good fanfic. Really like reading from his point of view. Please update!
| Fifilablonk chapter 24 . 6/21/2015
Omg I can't believe u left it at that poin can't wait to read from his POV when she drinks MY LOVE Loving this story and can't wait for ur next update so hurry up lol x x also have u read the fourth book shadow study's I didn't even know she had done a new book until I saw it on amazon I like read it in two days how sad is that
| Juliana chapter 24 . 6/17/2015
Where can I find the alternative chapter because I can't find your profile?
| Juliana chapter 24 . 6/14/2015
This chapter is full of twists and surprises, as is the whole book. I'm glad I found this online book after it was finished (or possibly almost finished).
| Katereh chapter 18 . 5/29/2015
This chapter is pretty good, so don't think I'm being harsh, but there are some things you could improve on to make it even better. Firstly, you tend to repeat the same phrases word for word to make it as similar as possible to the book. This technique is usually used by writers to show the perspective of a child, a child's naivety or a lack of understanding, like in 'the Boy in Striped Pyjamas' or 'the Girl With All the Gifts'. As Valek is not a child, the technique is misplaced and somewhat confusing. Try replacing some of the words with synonyms, or changing the sentence order. This will also make it more interesting and varied to read.
I know I sound like an English teacher, but you could really use commas better. I sometimes have to read sentences twice to understand where the emphasis and pauses are supposed to be. Jeez, I really do sound like an English teacher. Not a good thing.
Also, I was pretty sure Criollo WAS chocolate, rather than being similar. Criollo seems to be mildly psychoactive (increase vulnerability of mind to magic), mildly addictive (Ambrose hoards it) and contains theobroma. Chocolate does this exactly. In fact, theobroma is the active ingredient of chocolate, the one that makes you feel good. Furthermore, a quick Google search reveals that 'criollo' is another name for cocoa bean. Maybe I'm wrong, but I would not compare Criollo with chocolate, as I think they may be the same thing.
Sorry for the long and harsh review. But if I told you 'you're wonderful', then you wouldn't improve, and my words would change nothing. Don't take it personally. I think the rest of it is very good.
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/28/2015
in paragraph (approx.) 81 you said "... to Brazell's territory in MD-7"
firstly its not his "territory" more of a district coz territory is the whole of Ixia, hence the territory of ixia thing.
secondly, MD5 is brazell's district not MD7(rassmussen)
I'm sorry for the really tiny and petty criticism but i'm a die-hard fan of poison study so.. yeah i'm prone to things like that :/
| taz chapter 24 . 4/27/2015
please continue writing this one as i want to know what happens at the end of this as i have read the poison study series and i want to finish reading valeks point of view x