|Reviews for Snake Factor|
| Memlo chapter 1 . 8/3
Uhhhh you write so WELL damn that's some good narration
| MerridewLover chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
OH MY GOD, Suzaku was HORRIBLE in this fic!
I loved every second of it.
This was truly amazing and I applaud you heavily, I absolutely loved every bit of this, as one of my favorite cliches is one character hanging on to the other's arm for dear life as they face a fear! And your writing was phenomenal, as well as your characterizations—honestly, everything was hilarious and sweet and in character.
THAT ENDING THOUGH. LOVE IT.
| LoonyZ chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
mentioning kei and watanuki was priceless.. And i agree that your suzaku was well-made.. But what i've really enjoyed was lelouch's way of rationalizing and denial of his fear :) totally awesome
| me chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
FYI, instead of 'non-blinking,' I think the word you're looking for is 'unblinking.' Grammar is your friend:)
| AlphaSilverLover chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Hey you, Not to sound evil or anything but I AM trying to help you when I say, "TAKE THIS STORY OFF RIGHT NOW!"
This story belongs to Tachibana An and is on Prince of Tennis Silver Pair. It is horrible to copy-n-paste something that does not belong to you. Please do not do it again. You should stick to writing your own stories.
| Mach the Cynic chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
I hope you did well on your exams. Having said that, you need to take this down immediately. This story is nearly a carbon copy of Tachibana An's "Of-Wussies-and-Pythons-and-Devious-Little-Boys".
Your previous fics have shown that you do have the talent and creativity to write your own stories, so you don't have much to stand on. I won't report you because I see this as an honest mistake, but I recommend that you take this down for your own good.
| DattebayoUrie01 chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
Lol. I can imagine Suzaku doing a big thumb's up like how Gai-sensei and Rock Lee does on Naruto after buying those tickets...
| Plagiarism is wrong chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Well aren't you special? Posting a story that isn't yours. It's called plagiarism and I'm sure you know what that means. Take the story down and write your own God damn work! Child!
| The Warty Hogg chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Why is this story still posted? It was plagiarized and should be taken down by the thief immediately. If a reader liked the story, they were enjoying the original, not this cut and paste job. As a student, the thief should be doubly ashamed because I quite sure her professors discussed plagiarism with her in more than one class.
| not a plagiarist chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
community. / stop_
Try writing your own stories, idiot.
| Vicious-Fluffy-Bunny-Llama chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
HA HA HA!
This is amazingly funny and awesome. You're a great author.
| iBelieveInAngels chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
It's strange how easy it is for me to imagine Lulu being afraid of snakes...
Anyway, this is so cute!
| xxAwesomeLucyxx chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
"Hey Lucy, isn't this story freaking awesome?"
"Why yes," Lucy said with an evil grin, "Yes it is."
| HisaAngel chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
lolz Gotta love Suzaku! XD I could imagine him doing that just to get Lelouch to cling onto him again XD ahaha Lelouch afraid of snakes...now that's easy to imagine...this story made my day! XD
| addie-cake chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
oh wow...that was amazingly awesome...i mean, lelouch was just so adorable and i loved suzaku. it was perfect, and how could we all resist picking on sweet, little lulu?