|Reviews for My Queen|
| chemiczen chapter 15 . 1/27
I tried reading the first chapter of this story months ago, but I was turned off by the typos. And I thought to my self, "Well this looks like another average fic with bad grammar. Better not waste time reading this."
I was so WRONG! I feel stupid now for not giving the story a chance. This is now my favorite fic among the Lelouch/Kallen pairing. Aside from a few typos here and there, the only thing somewhat lacking for me is Kallen's presence in the 2nd half of the story so far. After all the things that went down in the 1st half, I expected her to be more relevant and be more 'queenly', but then she got delegated to the 'damsel-to-be-kept-away-from-danger' role. Yes, it makes perfect sense for this to happen with Lelouch's mindset, but I just wanted Kallen to be more relevant and have more direct impact on the plot. Anyway, it's a minor gripe. Nothing substantial to lessen my enjoyment of the story.
That being said, I'm really looking forward to the ending of this amazing story. I'm hoping it isn't anything like the disappointing ending otherwise known as canon. But I have a feeling it won't disappoint.
And by the way, what's with the low number of favs and follows on this fic? This definitely deserves above a thousand at least. Way more worthy than some of the other less original and abandoned ones that I stopped reading. What's that? I haven't fav'd the story yet? I reserve that for completed stories only. So for now, followed.
| The Hero named Villan chapter 15 . 12/6/2015
plot twist is excellent
| LabMember009Isaac chapter 15 . 11/22/2015
Marianne Vi Britannia is alive!? She is way more difficult than Schinezel.
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/16/2015
Great story please continue cant wait for the next one
| The King in White chapter 15 . 9/30/2015
| BlitzingRaptor chapter 15 . 9/25/2015
My god, Reading this in one sitting after finding it today all's i can say is "All Hail Lelouch!"
Please keep up the excellent work and take your time with it, please.
| Shadow Crusader chapter 10 . 8/27/2015
"I'm willing to taking anyone over him!"
After reading this chapter again, I sincerely hope that someone grabs Ohgi and reminds him of his worlds.
And is Ohgi and Viletta going to be karma houdinis like in the anime, or they will have retribution coming for them, because let's face it, it's thanks to them that Zero Requiem happened.
| Heinkelboy05 chapter 15 . 8/23/2015
When will the next chapter be up?
| kingrichard360 chapter 15 . 8/23/2015
holy fanfic, this has to be one of the most intense battles I've read so far.
for every trump card there was a counter play.
so is what a battle between geniuses looks like.
and then the plot twists, oh God the plot twists, so many questions !
this chapter was definitely a feast, thanks so much for this.
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/9/2015
Why are the black knight even allowed to speak,and why would he go there without security also what kaguya problem?
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/9/2015
Man I was hoping he wouldn't go through with the require and suzaku self righteous Ass is getting annoying I'm amazes that he doesn't below he deserves death
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/9/2015
All of them as soldiers have done horrible things yet they won't let what lulu dis go what hypocrites esp Ohgi a d villeta I'm kinda surprised no one has called him on her
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/8/2015
What hypocrites what happened to survival of the fittest and following the strongest? I'm surprised he hasn't gotten. Tpuch . With nunally or the ashfords
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/8/2015
Wtf iswrong with him he going to trust suzaku which i never got i the first place and he going to keep boaming himself for other actions just cause he was involed
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/8/2015
Man one of lulu and many hero's most annoying qualities is to blame themselves for other actions