Reviews for Taking Advice
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
Awww cute and awesome, I loved it and excellent job
TXJ chapter 1 . 8/8/2009
not cheesy... I enjoyed it very much.
Shandrial chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Cheesy or not, it was a very fitting ending! What a wonderful story! I simply adore Jyu and Shunsui, I can't get enough of them. Well written and your characterizations were good.
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I really like cheese. Really, really like cheese. Melted, it's the food of the gods. (Ambrosia? Pfft. A distant second.) This is warm melty goodness without the sodium and calories. Very good for a person.

Dialogue crisp, snappy, and totally IC; expository writing minimal and to the point. Yay, you.
Kiharu Lamperouge chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
I got serious chills reading the end, it was so moving. This was a truly lovely piece, so tender and open and I couldn't stop myself from smiling.
ravens rising chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
I have. NO WORDS. For how perfect and beautful and everything they are in this. My god. It's amazing. I can almost FEEL the longing. *shivers* Thank you so much.