Continue this fanfiction.

I want this as much as I want Haruhi Season 3.

Just wanted to mention that papa is pronounced papa in Japanese, so Kyon being called papa in Japan by his daughter would be likely.

Are you dead like Durandall? Send me a message if you are not. PLS CONTINUE

Hurry uppu!

PLS HURRY UPPU

I suppose the odds of this story being continued are slim, but should you ever think about getting back to it you should know that there is an audience of at least two people (you were recommended) for it.

Kyon's narration is on point, you even got his weirdly poetic ways (I'm thinking specifically about the "I drifted off to sleep but it wasn't an ocean, or even a lake, but a pitiful puddle" bit. Brilliant and so very, very Kyon) down to a T. The characterization too is wonderful - and is it just me or is there sweet, sweet Koizumi gay angst going on? Hazuki is perfect, by the way.

I love the premise, so much, and even better is that I love the execution. This fic lives up to its full potential and I couldn't be happier. So, thank you! Even if you don't update it this little fic is a total gem and I'm glad someone thought it up.

a shame you're not updating this story

Awesome story. Can't wait to see where it goes.

Damn, damn, damn, where my extension?)))
Hahaha, I liked it))) I'm relying on you)

More!

Damn is this the end? Its been awhile since you updated, I hope to see a chapter released to end this eventually since it seems like a nice story.

Also did you this story is recommended on TV Tropes?

You got Kyon's snark down very nicely xD

Dammit this is a dead fic isn't it? too bad i absolutely loved it and would love to see more but i guess that's not going to happen.

First, I have to say - I'm very impressed with your ability at writing Kyon's narration. It comes across as very natural and in-character, especially compared to a lot of other fanfics. The snark is great and the thought processes seem to progress much like his actual ones, so good job with that.

Moving on from that, this is also a very interesting idea for a fic, one that I hope (despite the, ah, rather large interval of time between now and the last update) you may continue someday - it's not a concept that just anyone would have thought of, and a very clever one at that, rife with the potential for good moments, dramatic tension, and ridiculous plot twists. So, good job with this one, and know that you've intrigued me, at least.

Unique. Wish you finish this.