|Reviews for Hello|
| Miranda Everlark chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
Tears are streaming down my face right. It was very short, but very beautiul. I couldn't ask for more.
| Crazy Cherries chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
I didn't really get the beginning, but as I read, it didn't really matter as much, because the ending more than made up for it.
| Scarlet Hour chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
I think you have great diction: so many little phrases stand out to me, like "rain clouds come to play." And I really like the ending a lot. I think it really melds into the mood beautifully and gives an ironic shade to an otherwise pretty tragic story.
| DramaDelicacy chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
beautiful. it's touching but unfortunately not enough to make me cry. (im looking for a really nice story that would make me cry cuz i feel like it ;p)
the story is still beautiful though. good job :)
may i ask what caused sakura's death though? im curious.
| einsodair chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Oh my that's so sad. -sniff- I hope my mom doesn't see me crying XD she might think that it was cause of something else haha! Anyway very well written oneshot. Great job and good luck.
Luna Rei Harmony
| Arukas-Guardian chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Aw, this was very nice! It was a bittersweet end. I like it a lot! Great job!
| ScornedxRose chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
aww soo sad, yeah
but great one-shot!
| BananaphoneBob chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Omg that was so sad! *sniff* but so so cute! I can't believe she didn't know he was telling the truth! And then he left her on that bench! And Kakashi arrived early!
So sad! (