|Reviews for The Fox and the Wolf|
| Elorix chapter 31 . 6/22/2012
You have a great sense of humor btw! Readers never really got to see how ridiculous Tobi is in the manga... something I wish was covered more. With this chapter, I got a really good feel for the stunts he pulls causing everyone to underestimate him as an impossibility for any real threat. Really getting to see him in his "simpleton mode" (which is excellently portrayed in your writing) gives me a deeper respect for the character.
I also really like the parts in this chapter where you could hear the crashing of stuff in the background as characters interacted in the hall... it's an element I feel that fanfiction writers often neglect to do... which is showing the reader a scene that is taking place outside their "visual" range but within their hearing distance. It adds a lot to your story telling; the depth and draw that keeps a reader hooked.
| Prescripto13 chapter 31 . 5/31/2012
"I have my suspicions, but I also have my doubts"
Heh heh heh. Itachi reminds me of the Sphinx from the film Mystery Men!
| Elorix chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
I second Akakoi's notion. Great chapter, next please! :D
| Koibitotedare chapter 30 . 2/29/2012
There is a problem...I seem to have run out of chapters to read... I suppose with an update this is quite curable though ne? :D
| Prescripto13 chapter 30 . 11/27/2011
Goofy!Tobi . . . oh how I miss him. :D
| Arrowachi chapter 29 . 11/17/2011
Wow... You are such an amazing author! I absolutely love this and I can't wait for more. So many questions are spinning around in my head. What's happened to Shimamaru and will be snap out of it? Will anyone realize what's going on with Iruka? How will Kakashi come to his senses? Will Kiba be okay without his dog? Is Sai okay? So much amazing stuff I can't wait!
I love how you've expanded and tweaked the smaller characters a little like Jugo and Udon, and this chapter with the Akatski was hilarious! The fridge. Hehe.
You are one of the best authors I have read on here and I am excited to read more of your stuff!
| Rika24 chapter 28 . 11/15/2011
i just seems like everyone is giving up on Kakashi except Pakkun, even Gai! i hope kashi comes aroud very soon :(
| jayley chapter 10 . 11/15/2011
ok, wth is wrong with neji! i honestly can't figure out if i really enjoy this story or not, it definitely stresses me out and i have a need to see what happens, like some mindbending movie...but on the otherhand i don't think i'm actually the type of person to enjoy suspense for too long, therefore i'm hating how secretive and weird everything is, but now i have to read to find out what on earth is going on
| jayley chapter 7 . 11/15/2011
aah, that certainly is suspicious! so tsunade's not as crazy as she kinda seems in the first few chapters, definitely intriguing...though i stand by the fake nice thing
| jayley chapter 6 . 11/15/2011
i'm just gonna assume there's super good reason for tsunade to be a bitch, but i do have one issue with tsunade's coldness, i feel that at the very least she'd pretend to be the same to their faces for appearance's sake-if team 7 really were renegade and going to root a good shinobi would not tip them off by giving them the cold shoulder all of a sudden. it's kinda obvious she doesn't trust them, which generally isn't something you want to communicate to people you think are traitors!
| jayley chapter 5 . 11/15/2011
soo i feel like i missed a super important step in tsunade's reasonings for why she thinks kakashi's gone round the bend and working with root? so far i feel like all she has is that he's got that sharingan, and that maybe he got it from killing a root anbu who might have been rin. but even if that's the case i'm definitely missing out on why that would be bad exactly? or is it that if that girl WASN'T rin then kakashi must've killed some other friend? i'm just confused as to what answer is the one that shows kakashi is still good...and wow you do a very good job of making tsunade a cold hearted bitch of a hokage! i'm really disliking her here-and i love her! i suppose it's village first and all but yikes
| librarycat9 chapter 28 . 9/19/2011
... This is a very epic story... And rather depressing. I hope things get better. Iruka and Shikamaru gone bad are terrifying.
| Kanrei chapter 28 . 8/25/2011
errr i kind of read this before rereading a chapter...since i forgot what happened. Nice chapter but i guess i have to read ch 27 again
| Elorix chapter 28 . 8/24/2011
OMG updates... your alive! I'm glad your better and writing again... cause I truly love and miss this story!
| Authorwhohasntwriteninyears chapter 27 . 8/8/2011
So I just have a question. What happened to chapters 28 & 29 I hadn't read them yet and I was wondering where they went