|Reviews for The Fox and the Wolf|
| Erisa Daelyn chapter 27 . 7/8/2011
I like the concept of this story. I think... I hope you continue it :) I'm hoping that when it is finished and everything ties together I will understand it a little more. It seemed to jump around a lot which left me in a lot of confusion half the time I was reading. I may have to re-read it though lol but overall seems like a good one!
| Sheeshasan chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
Hi! Here's my email:
I'll start on the earlier chapters tomorrow evening! I have yet to read past chapter 9 ( .') but I see more clearly on my first read so I'll correct every little mistakes as I come upon them.
Also: I might not be perfectly fullproof as english is not actually my first language but I believe I'm comfortable enough reading it to be of some help to you!
| Sheeshasan chapter 9 . 6/5/2011
Hi! I simply wished to let you know just how much I appreciated your story so far! I'm unfortunately not big on the review thing and often don't leave any unless I'm head over heel for a story or if an author needs feedback in order to resume a story he or she abandonned feeling that nobody was interested in it. Thus far I loved what you did with the characters, specially Iruka. I've never been a fan of that man but to use it the way you do definitely left me surprised. Angstier than what I feel is right for Naruto but than again this is fanfiction so we can do whatever we like and I since I'm greedily reading this story you won't see me complainning. I like this story so much actually that I would like to offer you my services if you wanted someone to just go over your chapters and correct typos and common mistakes. I'm not a writer so you wouldn't see me trying to change the structure of your sentences or anything, just correct the obvious. If you're interrested you have my email adress!
| asdf chapter 29 . 4/23/2011
I love this story. It's sad and yet it has humor. Please let Kakashi come back to his senses. I miss him already. Poor everyone. You turned Shikamaru (my favorite character) evil. What the heck? Please update soon. I really do love this story. Thanks.
| Random chapter 14 . 4/22/2011
Okay. You just lost a reader. It was interesting to begin with and I can appreciate what your trying to do but , the sheer stupidity of this chapter was a dealbreaker for me. Also I don't think that you are portraying Tsunade in the right manner as well. Sorry, if your find that offensive but, its my opinion.
| Prescripto13 chapter 29 . 4/13/2011
A day in the life of Deidara . . . heh heh heh.
| Razzika chapter 29 . 4/13/2011
I could not stop laughing in the second half of this. H-I-Larious!
| Kanrei chapter 29 . 4/13/2011
Im sorry but I found the chapter boring, sorry to say. It probably coz the akatsuki are in it, but I guess thats inevitable. Good work!
| Chand Aur Roshani chapter 28 . 4/12/2011
I love your depiction of Itachi. For me, you have found the perfect balance between detachedness and Fuck Off. I love it.
| Dragonist chapter 28 . 3/21/2011
This is almost as confusing as it is awesome. And since I'm pretty sure my new migraine is going to last for a week, that's pretty awesome. Congrats.
| Illay chapter 14 . 3/18/2011
Ok seriously. I love the plot but please edit first. you continuously use the word 'grate' instead of 'great' the difference is significant.
| ArgentumVulpes chapter 28 . 3/14/2011
Sorry about your writer's block, but I really liked this chapter. I laughed a lot (and earned some stares in the process ;P)
Good luck with writing
| Prescripto13 chapter 28 . 3/13/2011
"What's a Tobi?"
I almost expected Tobi to make a Sesame Street/leprechaun-inspired entrance at this point, lol.
An amusing read, Snim. I do miss the good ol'days after reading this. And regarding the manga, I suppose patience is a virtue wherever Kishimoto is concerned. However, sometimes I do feel as if I'm being tested by the man on a weekly basis. Sigh.
| Kanrei chapter 27 . 2/7/2011
wowa~ took me a extremely long time to reach this chap! hope you update soon!
| Guest chapter 27 . 2/7/2011
Kakashi's madness comes across as lethal and terrifying; Naruto's confrontation with him was electric and heartbreaking.
Udon the ninja banker, with the ability to BAMF! into the deposit vault . . . lol.
And as for the Fuka/Iruka duo? Man oh man, those two just keep on racking up the loathe/detest/despise points in the mind of yours truly. *continues plotting their horrible yet spectacular demise*
A stellar chapter, Snim!