What

Scar's a creeper in this. I don't think Nala would fall for him.

Though everyone is entitled to their own opinion and this is fan fiction. So, if you are proud of your story, then good for you.

It says SIMBA instead of Mufasa

I'll admit, when I first started reading this, I was just a wee bit weirded out. But then, two or three chapters in, it all started to click. I like this perspective of things. Cheers!

Found this story way to late now I don't have the fun of waiting for a new chap, but that's cool cause this story is awesome and I want a sequel

Fantastic!

Swahili of "which love: ambayo upendo

hey i really like the story i love scarxnala but i also love kovuxkiara so im happy for simbaxnala, anyways, can u write a story for me? im not 13 so i cant get a account (and no i wont lie), and my idea for the story i the later chapters become a little m rated, not a lot though, and there are only like 4 scar and nala story and 3/4 arent even complet yet after like 2 years anyways please write me back in this story or a diffrent one

You're in IB too? When are your exams?

Anyway, very nice story. I liked it a lot :D Especially the twist at the end with Vitani!

This was very good for your first FanFic! I liked how detailed you were with your writing, and your word choices. I usually get lost easily when reading another person’s story- but you did an excellent job at this one, and I didn’t get lost. Not once. YAY! I personally always thought that Vitani was so much more like Scar than Nuka or Kovu ever was, too. Even though Scar isn’t really his father… Don’t know what it is. Maybe it’s the maturity and intelligence that little Vitani has. This was a good one.

Go Nala

Sweet!

Yeay for Simba

hmm I wounder what is going to happen

Good Job!