Reviews for Touched
sing-write-life chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
Please please please write a second chapter
tonyzbn chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
Plz make a next chapter where they have sex at school or something i love this fanfic
guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
I fuckin love this story please do another chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
I freakin loved it! 3 plz cintinue
Cryselda chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
No second chapter? D: -cries-
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Woah! This was the best chapter youvery written. I loved the sex in it. You should do a zac efron, Justin brewer threesome
Master Gaga chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
You should definetly continue it. Add a second part. I loved it.
Anomalous chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Holy shit yes keep writing and make Edward top next time
Jazzy-Reader35 chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Write more. This seems like it could evolve very well
Knavo chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
PLEASE KEEP GOING! Please? Pretty please? Pretty please with a cherry popping fan-fic on top? I loved it! I normally HATE human fics (Ewww!Humans,Gross!) but I loved this! It was SO well written.

I kinda want to kidnap you. I would pull you into my big black van* and force feed you Hershey kisses. The Kisses because, C'mon if you're getting in my van I need to give you candy. I would then take you to a warehouse* and tie you to a desk where I would make you write fanfiction. Or maybe not even new stories, I would just make you update this one.

*I'm trying to bring back "Van-knappings".

*I'm also bringing back using warehouses for crimes.

P.S. I would gag you with a wooden spoon. Me Gusta Eighties throw backs.
Jake's Pup chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!
hut3 chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Keep doing more. Its so hot.
andy chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
this was hot i want more
allusia16 chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
WOAH i sooo loved this story i could almsot imagine jake dominanting edward
Layla chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
Dude love it! PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE write more! Thank you. :D
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