Reviews for Alternate New Moon
motherduckatschool chapter 19 . 10/25/2009
bum bum bum

Loved it

Keep writing.

Motherduckatschool
No love for you chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
I LOVE IT! twilight cross NCIS? can anyone say boo-ya?
gothgirl1245 chapter 19 . 10/24/2009
Please write more
Dearbhal chapter 18 . 10/18/2009
Loved the chapter!
Twilighter29707 chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
Hi, i of course am twilighter29707, and i'm really happy that you came up with a story plot to go between twilight and NCIS my two very favorite things but i have one suggestion.

D.I.A.L.O.G.U.E.

one word that means so much in writing i'm not meaning to sound rude, but without dialogue there is no story it really is a main component you can skip some like you did with i was snapped out of it by gibbs asking if i was okay, but other than that you should try to add a little bit more...good luck with writing i'm sure you'll be a great writer
gothgirl1245 chapter 18 . 10/15/2009
Please write more it is really good
motherduckatschool chapter 18 . 10/15/2009
AW she has to say goodbye!

Loved it.

Keep writing,

Motherduckatschool
gothgirl1245 chapter 17 . 10/11/2009
Please write more
Dearbhal chapter 17 . 10/11/2009
Are there humans? Is it the NCIS team? TELL ME! Update soon, please!
motherduckatschool chapter 17 . 10/11/2009
bum bum bum bum

Loved it.

Keep writing,

Motherduckatschool
motherduckatschool chapter 16 . 10/8/2009
bum bum bum

Loved it.

keep writing,

motherduckatschool
DaisyBell2 chapter 16 . 10/8/2009
ah gr! me want a another chapter! lol im excited to see new bella. can i say its amazing how much u were able to accomplish in ur story in only a short amount of chapters!
gothgirl1245 chapter 16 . 10/8/2009
Please write more
DaisyBell2 chapter 15 . 10/8/2009
ek! im glad everythings okay! or i hope it is anyways!
Bookits chapter 14 . 9/27/2009
Oh boy...so, she's going to be turned into a vampire? Cool, PLEASE write more soon!
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