Reviews for Home Run
janellab2k chapter 11 . 10/8/2016
Great story and characters. Wish there was a part two so we can see them develope in their careers and the proposal we know would come. Anyways...great writing. Thank you!
tff000 chapter 11 . 6/22/2016
good :)
tff000 chapter 10 . 6/22/2016
lol
tff000 chapter 9 . 6/22/2016
good ch.
tff000 chapter 8 . 6/22/2016
good.
tff000 chapter 7 . 6/22/2016
yikes, why is e running away
tff000 chapter 6 . 6/22/2016
good
tff000 chapter 5 . 6/22/2016
glad he ignored b
tff000 chapter 4 . 6/20/2016
good
tff000 chapter 3 . 6/20/2016
work will be interesting
tff000 chapter 2 . 6/20/2016
looking forward to dinner
tff000 chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
amusing start
acullen905 chapter 3 . 3/30/2015
Great chapter...liking the friendship between the girls much more in this chapter. Loved the relaxed atmosphere over dinner and showing the bonds growing.
acullen905 chapter 2 . 3/30/2015
I like where this is going with Edward and Bella interaction. I'm glad Jasper was brought into it now. I'm still not liking the Rose/Alice show. It feels like they look at Bella as a third wheel but maybe that's part of the story. Where she get enough confidence and put them in their place? It's telling of a good story though that you have feeling of like and dislike against characters. I really am enjoying this so far! You have me pulled in.

Andie
Guest chapter 11 . 11/8/2014
You are an amazing riter!
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