Reviews for Home Run
tff000 chapter 11 . 6/22
good :)
tff000 chapter 10 . 6/22
lol
tff000 chapter 9 . 6/22
good ch.
tff000 chapter 8 . 6/22
good.
tff000 chapter 7 . 6/22
yikes, why is e running away
tff000 chapter 6 . 6/22
good
tff000 chapter 5 . 6/22
glad he ignored b
tff000 chapter 4 . 6/20
good
tff000 chapter 3 . 6/20
work will be interesting
tff000 chapter 2 . 6/20
looking forward to dinner
tff000 chapter 1 . 6/20
amusing start
acullen905 chapter 3 . 3/30/2015
Great chapter...liking the friendship between the girls much more in this chapter. Loved the relaxed atmosphere over dinner and showing the bonds growing.
acullen905 chapter 2 . 3/30/2015
I like where this is going with Edward and Bella interaction. I'm glad Jasper was brought into it now. I'm still not liking the Rose/Alice show. It feels like they look at Bella as a third wheel but maybe that's part of the story. Where she get enough confidence and put them in their place? It's telling of a good story though that you have feeling of like and dislike against characters. I really am enjoying this so far! You have me pulled in.

Andie
Guest chapter 11 . 11/8/2014
You are an amazing riter!
Tarbecca chapter 1 . 10/14/2014
Recommended this story in the Fic Dive over at ADF! :)
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