|Reviews for Driven|
| bhoney chapter 3 . 1/31/2010
Okay, I don't do death!drabbles, either, so I'll finish this one out. ;)
"Why? How? I've run out on you twice, now, Dean. How can you still trust me," Sam's gaze flicked away and he lowered his tone, "when I don't trust myself?" Aw, Sammy...I am glad he brought this up though, so Dean could let him know that he DOES trust him.
"You're a Winchester—and that makes you the hero of the story." He reached over and tousled Sam's hair with his left hand. "Or at least the hero's trusty geek sidekick." LOVED that-great line. And perfectly in character.
Nice climax to the story, too. Loved how it all went down, and the hairsbreadth escape from the other car hitting them. Liked this fic a lot-it's one of my faves of yours. I'm favoriting it now!
| bhoney chapter 2 . 1/10/2010
Okay, I can't read Hell!fic, so instead of reading your drabble for this week, I'm coming back to this and leaving another review. I forgot to follow up and do the last two chapters of it when they posted. :)
"Sam had uselessly spouted RICE—Rest Immobilize Cold Elevate—at him in regards to treating his mashed arm" I love this image of Sam being all mother-henny when Dean's injured.
This totally cracked me up: ""Yes. Poltergeists love taking control of and tossing around inanimate objects."
"Wait a minute!" Dean objected. "Are you calling my baby an inanimate object? She's—"
"That's how the poltergeist sees the Impala, not me," Sam backpedalled." *snickers* Perfect piece of banter! SO glad Sam saw the error of his ways and backpedaled. LOL
"Wards need to be stationary to be effective; they need to be grounded. Since there's no walls on the open road, we'll ground the wards by burying them." I don't know if that's true, and you found it in your research, or if you made it up, but it's little details like that which make your stories feel so authentic. Nicely done. Loved the "open-air" poltergeist, too. :)
| Linnie McCary chapter 3 . 8/22/2009
What a unique idea, using the trucker! Revisiting the hospital was also a surprise. Great tie-in, too, with "Home." Innovative, tense, with really good pace, not to mention some very nice bro-ness. Thanks for sharing!
| Nana56 chapter 3 . 8/21/2009
Very nicely done. :) Dean's praise of Sam's driving was perfect and something they both needed.
Great fic, hon! :)
| Nana56 chapter 2 . 8/14/2009
I AM still enjoying the ride...and what a ride it is! Whew! Poor Impala, I thought she might be a goner there for a minute. And what about Dean's arm? Hm.
Poor Sam is having to relive the wreck while they work on this case, too. Not nice for the poor guy. :(
This is a really great fic. :)
| Vanessa Sgroi chapter 2 . 8/13/2009
Ahh, this second chapter was great too. Loved my little hurt!Dean fix. Looking forward to the next go-around.
| Vanessa Sgroi chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
Hi, Sue. I'm just now catching up with this story. I loved the first chapter. It's so interesting to revisit the events in IMTOD. On to the next chapter...
| Lady Chekov chapter 2 . 8/12/2009
Oh, interesting! I like where this is going!
| bhoney chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
I really enjoyed this story when I read it in the zine. Loved that you picked up on the accident from DT and went in this direction with it. It's a really original and clever idea, and I liked the story a lot! It's one of my favorites of yours.
| Nana56 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
As I sit here in Columbia, MO at a friend's house on our way to KazCon, I'm smiling big. :D They were here!
Great fic! Very enjoyable.
See you tomorrow!
| deangirl1 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Great start. Nice to get Sam's pov on some of what went down. I'm a bit surprised that Dean is ok with everything as he seems to be... Why do I think Moffat having a son is going to be important?
| linda-helen chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I liked it. Really interesting to go back to the accident. That had to stir up a lot of emotions for the boys and it wasnt actually adressed to much in the show. Fanfiction rocks!