Reviews for Harry Potter: My Life Is My Own |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am sad to see that thus story has been abandoned. I really do enjoy this story quite a bit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have been enjoying this story and was sad to realise it is not complete, nor has it been updated since 2017. I would have enjoyed reading more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far. Aside from numerous spelling and grammar issues, the story is otherwise well-written in that it is engaging and keeps the reader's interest in what happens next. It is unfortunate that you appear to have abandoned this, but I will also say that you at least chose a good stopping point at which to do so. The big things are rolling and the reader can choose in their own minds how the rest plays out. Nevertheless, I will add it to my followed stories in case you one day return to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Albus has done some pretty evil shit, Fawkes song shouldn't comfort him... He should be forced to fix the situation as much as possible, among that return any Potter elves still alive. If they're left with new masters Potter family secrets are revealed... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbledore is guilty of murder of the dead Potter elves, or at least manslaughter... I hope to see him punished... |
![]() ![]() ![]() After binge reading this entire story in about a day, i only have one complaint... That there isnt more, and that the last update was over 5 years ago. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That’s not who his grandparents are but I can see you’re going with an AU so I’ll let it slide |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oui c'est une très bonne histoire j'espère y voir une suite un jour |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's obviously not finished, but what IS written is a relatively good story so far, and is very interesting to say the least... I honestly hope the author or someone else, will continue writing this story at some point. Definitely going to favorite this story and follow it as well... Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I love this take! You are taking the best bits from fanfictions and working them together. Hope you keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it so far and seriously hope you will start updating it again someday soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry is so weirdly formal, what child speaks like that? Mr Potter is my father, his father died while he was still a toddler, where would his father have ever been refered to Mr Potter in front of him? |
![]() ![]() This was very good to read, like the way you built the story. Hope that you will find a way to finish it one day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter is making me cry |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too bad you never finished this story I liked it |