Reviews for Marriage
sfbxfcb chapter 10 . 1/30/2012
Wonderful!
hooknemma chapter 10 . 10/10/2011
this is actually the worst thing i've ever read
lift-me-up chapter 9 . 11/14/2010
Love this story
lift-me-up chapter 9 . 11/14/2010
Love this story
Damon Heart chapter 2 . 8/20/2010
I too love this show but one thing is certain. the characters need more depth more Holly/ Vince persona they need more description. the proposal was nice a little sudden but nice slow things down a bit and add more description and depth and you should be fine the story is still good.

-Damon Heart -
DaysLikeThis96 chapter 9 . 7/20/2010
I like it please update super soon? :)
HarryJamesPotterismyhero chapter 2 . 1/29/2010
Um...wow. Yeah this story sucks..if you really want to create good stories I would recommend creating more of a scene. You should use imagery. Right, now I can't picture what's going on. Also, don't put it like Holly: Hey Gare! Guess what? You should write it like, "Hey Gare! Guess what!" Holly shrieked. It's how real writers write their stories and it would make yours so much better.
runswiththepack13 chapter 3 . 12/16/2009
AWESOME STORY! Update soon!
lydias-martins chapter 3 . 10/8/2009
GOOD STORY. i just have one thing to point out. When you said they were licking iceing off eachother's lips, it kinda grossed me out, but thats love! Godd job, you should really continue and write more fan-fics.