Reviews for Thoraln Conspiracy
timano chapter 14 . 2/3/2010
A tremendously enjoyable story. 10 out of 10 stars!
Kippindel chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I is finnished Noof... and be moving on to Fractured Glass
Laura Harkness chapter 14 . 1/4/2010
wow. this was incredible. just as i'd expect it to be coming from you.

your writing just keeps getting better and better and your original characters (like Ben!) are simply awesome.
w1nter chapter 14 . 12/10/2009
Ah, looking forward to it already... but I suppose this 'Sam' is the one that goes travelling with them...? Poor Ben, all left behind. Hmph.
w1nter chapter 13 . 12/10/2009
Note to self: never ask the Doctor any "cultural questions"... yeah.
w1nter chapter 12 . 12/10/2009
You know what this SCREAMS to me? “What d’ya think of him?” - I'll bet you can guess. Why, Noof, WHY? Nice conclusion, though. :) Go Noof...
w1nter chapter 11 . 12/10/2009
Andrea. LOL! XD Is Ben coming with them now? He'd better be, so I can plague you about the lack of Brittany-Ben romance in future stories. :D
w1nter chapter 10 . 12/10/2009
There was something extremely awesome about this chapter! I like the end bit... hehehe. At least even though Brittany stuffed it up she fixed it again (albeit at the very last second). I also very much liked Ben's reaction to the inside of the TARDIS. You'd think it'd get old, but... it didn't in this case. But again - Brittany, Ben, alone in the TARDIS... *bashes head against wall*
w1nter chapter 9 . 12/10/2009
"enveloping Ben in a hug" - curse you, woman, how can you fail to see what I'm seeing here? But no, she doesn't write romance... gah! ;) And how did Brittany know it was the yellow button?
w1nter chapter 8 . 12/9/2009
Ah, I keep imagining Brittany-Ben romance! Argh! Good chapter, though. :)
w1nter chapter 7 . 12/9/2009
Brilliant - that's exactly the sort of thing that'd happen in DW - the whole “If you’re going to hold a man by his sleeves, I would first check to make sure his jacket wasn’t unbuttoned" thing. Excellent!
w1nter chapter 6 . 12/1/2009
Ooh, did anyone else get that uncomfortable feeling, like something weird is crawling down your spine, when the general did the whole "I hope you’re not thinking of doing anything rash,” the General said, leaning in so close to the screen that Brittany could pick out every detail on his pockmarked face. “I think you should consider where your loyalties lie, Miss Harvey. Consider it very carefully.”

Cree-ee-ee-eepy... I can actually picture his "pockmarked face" in my mind... eh. o.0 Overactive imagination, much?
w1nter chapter 5 . 11/30/2009
Oh ho! Well, the fat's in the fire, now, innit? He just had to do the whole ego thing and announce his name... tsk, tsk, Doctor, you shoulda known that'd get you in trouble one day... But I really loved the rant: “Some prefer ‘oi, you’, while others use the old favourite ‘get him’. I’ll respond to almost anything, though, for now, feel free to call me ‘I Won’t Stand For This’, or possibly even ‘Leave This Planet Alone’. Your choice.” Hehehe. Good work, Noof. XD
w1nter chapter 4 . 11/30/2009
Ah, a truly masterful chapter - very convincing sci-fi writing, all that about the universe etc. Very good. And I liked "It was probably an ego thing." Cuz it was funny. Ehehe. And the Doctor's mental anguish. That was good too. Hm. And I do apologise for the terribly long rambling review to the last chapter, which was for some part not about the chaoter at all. Simply inexcusable of me. :P
w1nter chapter 3 . 11/30/2009
Hey, wouldja lookee there it's the Noof's story and I'm reading it again... I'm afraid I'll be losing track of all the characters, though. Hm. Good chapter, though. I love the bit about big red buttons... hehehe. Innocent. Hehe. And I must say again that if it were any other author I would definitely be predicting/expecting something to be happening between Brittany and Ben. So many CLUES! But alas, all is imagined... Oh, and another thing: I finished TWO WHOLE CHAPTERS OF TELGARS today! Are you PROUD of me, or WHAT? Just shows you how much time I have on my hands on the hols, I guess. But still, you should be like totally proud. TWO WHOLE FREAKING CHAPTERS! YEAHH! Unfortunately, the uploading of said chapters will have to wait until tomorrow, after I have reproofread them. You know how you should always wait a day with these things... And even then I'll only be uploading Chapter 8, not 9, cuz (drumroll please) I'd like you to take a squiz at it before I do. You're in it, you see, and I want to verify that I haven't done anything utterly inexcusable with you... so, yeah. I'll be awaiting your reply with bated breath. :P

In summary, love Chapter 3 of Thoraln Conspiracy. It has big red buttons. :D
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