A fascinating, involving, funny, intense, unexpected story. It was a pleasure to read it

"No, what's not fair is treating me like a child, Edward." Ooooh I liked that line very much. Interesting development!

I'm really detesting the 'Fates' right now! Too too much Dean Koontz! HEA is my bailiwick!

Such an amazing wonderful story!

Wasn't Hera Hercules' mother?

I really enjoyed most of this story. The challenges seemed to be slightly awkward, although the idea of the Fates was really unique and interesting. I thought that the ending was slightly too short, and rushed even, I would have enjoyed hearing slightly more about Carlisle and Esme. I also thought that if you made the changes in the character less obvious, more subtle, it would flow better, you were essentially telling us what was happening, rather than showing us. All in all, this was a great story. Very unique and clever!

Not sure if y'all still read reviews, but I couldn't help but notice that Mike Newton was cast as Bella's ex boyfriend who is a police officer (chapter 15) and Edward's boss at Lowe's (implied chapter 5 and confirmed chapter 24). Great story though, can't wait to finish.

This is awesome! I read it a while ago and stumbled on it again. It is even better the second time.

This was such a great story and I enjoyed every minute of it. Well written, great progression, nothing out of place as you tied it all up in the end. So glad I found this on Facebook. Thank you.

Recommended this story in the Fic Dive over at ADF! Loved it!

Laraunt might just be #4 on the fates list

Whoa we're near the end

Thrustward, heh heh

That was a really good story. Thanks.

I think Bella deserves better...why does'she always get whoreward? Fuck that stupid'dirty cock'sucker Bella had it right when she wanted to leave him...