Reviews for HALO
davidnm2007 chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
An interesting beginning. I'll be curious to see how this develops!
Bluedermis chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Well, I don't know whats going to be happening next, but if it lives up to the promise of the first chapter, then it will be excellent.

Truly, a credit to your skill. I hope you write more of this story, and that it is as good as it started as.