|Reviews for What You've Become|
| Er-my-nee Weasley chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
If lily didn't marry James we wouldn't have Harry and therefore we wouldn't have a story.
| Kitsune1978 chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
The kiss made me shiver. It was so unexpected! Anyway I love the idea they shared one kiss at least.
| Luna Lark chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
this is really good! if stories like this can make me feel the way i feel now, it's a good story. i love it!
| Princesstale chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Aww that was so sad..
I too wish that Severus ended up with Lily
| lightning strikes 101 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
R U FREAKIN SERIOUS?
HOW COULD U LET THAT BE THE END! THAT WAS...UNFORGIVABLE! GODDAMNIT! SHE LOVES SEV! AND HE LOVES HER, AND DAMN THAT POTTER! NO! (IM LIKE CRYING HERE AND ITS NOT FUNNY!) I CANT BELIEVE U ACTUALLY LET THEM SEPARATE AFTER THE KISS! THAT WAS...ARGH! HELL TO ME! and ESPECIALLY:"Don't come to see me again," she said softly. "It breaks my heart to see what you've become." THAT WAS...ARGH!BAWLING MY EYES OUT HERE!
Y? Y R U SO CRUEL? ESPECIALLY AFTER: "Losing you was the worst thing that ever happened to me too. You'll always remain my best friend in my heart," THAT WAS FREAKIN WORST THAN HELL! OMG...I STILL CANT GET OVER THE FACT THAT U RUINED THE MOST BEAUTIFUL, MOST SWEETEST STORY EVER! ARGH! NO
a VERY disgruntled
| BootstrapBoula chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Aw, I could see that actually happening.
| Dormantness chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
So sad and deep... I like the part where she sais it broke her heart to see what he's become. Fits in nicely. Anyway, it was well done.
| Cinderpool-Beam Me Up Sokka chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Aww! I've never been a fan of Lily/Snape, but I thought it was really sweet! Thanks, I'm smiling now!