Reviews for Molto Bella
mistydawn7 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
“Bet that ass of yours would look pretty with my handprint on it,”

Wait, she knew what he was saying/ Oh, I...she shoulda smacked him , or at least laid into him in Italian!

I'm excited about an update a day. Sounds like this story will heat up quickly:)
AllMyHopeIsGone chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Oh, yeah, you did good girl!

I couldn't believe that he stepped on the honey sticks! I had to read it over 3 times to make sure I was reading it right. What an ass. lol

Her understanding what he said was priceless.

Can't wait to read the rest of the story. (said like Paul Harvey)
readingmama chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I like the subtle nod to the honey sticks. Although I like them better on Edward's body than his shoes. ; )
dark-soul-in-love chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
This is going to be amazing! XD I am so happy you have another story. It's awesome. Write soon plz!
droga1 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
interesting beginning. would like to see it continue.
Chilly Howdy chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Yup start of a good story! Can't wait to read more!
angeleyes501 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I like it so far keep going!
asf134 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
OMG! i luv this already!
twilightmom3 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
This is going to get really good, I can see it now. Nothing gets you all hot and bothered like a good mouth off. Can't wait till you update.
Padme-And-Anakin-4-Ever chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
O! This looks very interesting! I can't wait to read more! Edward seems to have his hands full in this one! XD
Americasweetie chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I liked it a lot.

Very good! :D

You're a great writer.
caseytabwizz chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Love it! Please update soon!
AngelDivided chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
i can see the chemistry between them already. Love it
mycrookedsmile chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
love this!
ehur06 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I love the first chapter and can't wait for more! Great story idea.
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