Fun and quirky story. Thank goodness, for an unexpected pineapple! LOL

Loved this story!

So cute and funny! We all have our own way: of looking at things, of spending our time, of communicating.
Thanks for writing.

I kind of can't believe I'm going to admit this, but you wrote a story that actually makes me like Edward Cullen a little bit. Seriously. I feel like I need to tell people. I'm no convert - once a wolf girl, always, but this was so much better than I expected! I expected funny. I got that, but sweet, too, which came at me completely out of left field.

I don't know what else to say. *speechless*

Great storytelling!

That was great! Funny, sweet, and original. Thank you.

Oh man, this was amazing! You flushed out the pair of them so well. I LOVE IT!

Hahaha loved it!

What a charming, quirky and all-together original O/S. Stumbled upon this and had to give it a read.

loved it. so much better than finishing the stupid work sitting on my desk. you are a lovely writer.

This was an awesome story! Every character had a different personal voice, and I enjoyed reading every word! I think Twilight would have been so much better if Edward and Bella were like this! They seemed much more real, balanced, and well-suited for each other. They were interesting and not at all annoying! But there wasn't too much of them, so it was good. What you described earlier about how outside accounts of a person's life makes it less biased is exactly what makes this story work. Thanks again for writing such good Twilight stories! Please consider continuing the Seth story, 'cause he's my favorite! -Caseyandra

Loved it in all its quirky glory!

Too Short! I want to hear more of their "strange courtship!"

I love it!

Ah, that last line made me chuckle. I enjoyed this story, it was intriguing and interesting and somewhat bizarre, but a good read too

This was pretty cool:):):)