Reviews for The Outlandish Courtship of Isabella Swan |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love love love love this! The format is really cool. It's like writing an Edward/Bella story without really writing an Edward/Bella. I have to say I liked the parts with Jessica and Lauren the best. They were really funny. The part with Emmett felt right too. I know how most people write him as the "dumb one", but your Emmett is spot on. I can totally see him as insanely intelligent. Ah...John Cusack. I will say no more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, funny, but I'm dissapointed that it's AH I think it'd be even better if you wrote Charlie's imagenary statements-gathering about the canon couple. I don't mean from the pack etc, but regular people around Forks. It'll be interesting to speculate how they would have retionalized all the weirdness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay this made absolutly no sense, but I was laughing so hard at the end. I loved it! Such a quirky different take on things. I'll admit, the next time I look at a pineapple or grapes again I'm going to laugh. Thanks for the fun story! Holly |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story. I like how it is revealed through interviews, each with a distinct voice. I was wondering if it would turn into that cult film, Harold & Maude, with the funerals & a really old Bella, but it didn't and the fruit is adorable. BTW, pineapple is a symbol of hospitality. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I told you elsewhere that I loved this but it was good enough to bear repeating. Lauren was hilarious and you made me like her a little more, and I love the line there about grapefruits. But the ending line was brilliant and this whole thing was funny and I would love to see more perspectives on their weird-ass relationship if you're ever so inclined to write it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, I love this. |